i was looking on the 'ru and saw these friend books that piss me off so much. here's my spergerald why:
<redditspaceCoco:
>I am good at: I don't want to bragBullshit. Have you ever met a humble 8 year old?
>I don't like: Wasting timeI sincerly doubt that any child would be concerned about something as insignificant to them as time
>Animal: Turritopsis Dohrniiand
>What I want to be when I grow up: Very oldAre incredibly unsubtle in what it's trying to say. <Coco lost her parents! So she's like, le scared of death! So, she'd like thing that live forever and she'd like, wanna live forever!
Change her animal to something more realistic, as with all of the animals in South Africa, I doubt a child would pick something as ugly as a jellyfish. Change what she wants to be to something like a nurse or a vet, which shows she's always liked helping people (which is realistic!!!)
It's really, really on the nose.
Overall with this one: Very on the nose, and doesn't feel like a child wrote this.
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