Ongezellig
IAZ and soft NAZ
New thread
IT'S ACTUALLY OVER FOR REAL THIS TIME
https://petjeaf.com/ongezellig/posts/ongezellige-update-130-dubbelslot
A new petje update released a couple of minutes ago. After "The combination of a burnout, a new life stage, a difficult pitch phase, a limited support and a successful side" and 4 years, Massa is cancelling the monthly ongezellig illustrations, and with it, any and all potential for more ongezellig content whatsoever.
<Thank you again to everyone who contributed. I hope you are still happy with the results that you have been able to make true. Remember, Ongezellig not as a failed pilot, but as a successful short film.
120 replies omitted.Too late nigger. I posted the thread on /raid/ so your zoot's gonna pwn your zoomertroon ass.
>>22218
i cant post either so ill say the thing i just wrote up here
Hey there, i'm still here
I started a rework on my scene months ago but im a lazy selfish little fuck so I've barely worked on it
As for the other scenes, I might free up the scenes that were taken by ppl that then went radio silent, also I could replace one of the filler scenes with something that's not as time consuming
(pic rel is not everything that I've done)
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Yeah most likely
Looks like an earlier version of the library and it has a similar drenthe joke
Maybe massa showed it off to a few people and a leakerGOD posted it
The video was made in 2015 so it is possible it might have been an influence 2 replies omitted.
>mlp
>shh
>watamote
<ERM THAT'S NOT A CARTOON CH-ACK!
>Vera's design comes from a game
There's many instances
mlp is for the designs, right? I also noticed it by the eyes
Yes, and also in some animation choices, the inspiration is clear there
it’s where the screenshot is from, but since it says “no ‘p” it means it’s not the original. i just wanna know what brim was present in the original
have you maybe thought it doesnt exist and its a joke because of the dancing swede
Did xhey ACK or something?
they moved on
He's Zoot's husband. They're both obsessed with a white (germanic) woman despite both being non-whites (a slav and a latino). Many such cases.
Ok Zaryans, I've read a decent amount of fanfics since I joined this GEMMY SPACE and I've decided to rank them all (the ones I felt like)
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Reunion. 5/10: It's ok, the pacing is kinda quick for what it's trying to do, and it feels the needs to explain everything instead of letting the reader interpret it.
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Death and Reborn, 7/10: I would've given this a 9, but I re-read it and realized it wasn't as good as I remembered. I do like the concept, but it also suffers from bad initial pacing and overexplaining. Also it was assisted with AI and it kinda shows in some parts, but it didn't hinder how I felt about it. Pretty decent, but it could be better
10 Dutch Days, 2/10: Really annoying dialogue. They won't shut up about the stupid game Maya played, and mentioning important things which are never brought up again. Everything feels forced, and I just don't care about any of the characters. It's a decent concept, having the personalities of Coco and Maya somewhat swapped (doe Maya still kinda has anxiety), but it's so poorly executed I can't give it any higher than a 2/10
When Days Get Brighter in Amsterdam, 4/10: Could've been decent were it not
>wordswordswords
the fanfiction. It's also written like its a screenplay and NOT a book, so that's weird. There's also a side story that I just don't care about, and the nigger who uploaded it to AO3 is a retard and its impossible to read so you have to go on PLEBBIT if you wanna actually read it.
Kinda cool concept, but once again, things feel pretty forced
Total Opposites, 0/10: Abysmal Yurifag dogshit. Cleo likes Coco and goes about getting with her in the stupidest ways possible. Everybody acts out of character and nothing makes sense. SNCA the fanfiction.
One More Shot, 7/10: Maya becomes and alcoholic.
Creator deleted it because they're a selfish little fuck or whatever. The first few chapters really fucking suck doe
Tipping Point, 6/10: Coco hits Maya cause she got mad over an insult. The family kinda collapses from there. It's not finished yet so idk how it's gonna end. Decent storytelling though it's not very descriptive, and has pretty akward dialogue at times. Also Coco acts really out of character in this, and the Eiko plotline is shoved in which completely derails the entire thing.
Project Ongezoid, -3 Thrembillion/10: One of the only Zellig Fanfics on Watpad. I would've given it a 9/10, but for SOME REASON, THE CREATOR MADE AN AMAZING AND kinda EMOTIONAL STORY, AND DECIDED TO MAKE THE ENDING "IT WAS ALL A DREAM!!" WHY??? IT WAS SO FUCKING GOOD AND YOU RUINED IT YOU SELFISH NIGGER
that's all from me, im writing my own fanfiction right now about Coco beating up Maya's shitskin bully (which might lead into an overarching story from there) but ive been kinda depressed (Maya reference GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEG) so it might take a while
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>>110205
CONTRAVERSIAL
Comfortably Uncomfortable, 7/10: The Title sums up how I felt while reading it. This is the length of an average novel GEG. Maya and Coco essentially fall in love (in a natural way) but because they're sisters, it just feels weird. I know they're not blood related but it's still a bit weird. ALTHOUGH, it never made me that uncomfortable throughout, though it did get close at times.
There's no incest (cause incest needs 1. the people to be blood related and 2. actual sex, which is not present in the thing)
Overall, it was a decent read, but it really should've been between Maya and Someone Else, or just have Maya and Coco getting closer instead of falling in love.
>ESL FNF PEDO ESL FNF PEDO ESL FNF PEDO ESL FNF PEDO YOU CANNOT LIKE ANY OF THIS BECAUSE IT IS YURIFAG SLOP YOU FA-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!
>This is the length of an average novel
>Maya and Coco essentially fall in love (in a natural way)
we OVERLY good on that folk😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
the fact that i completely forgot about that just goes to show how bad this was written
ok that makes more sense than the esl unformatted niggernonsense you had before
>>110301
why is the plotbeat always like "something happens, maya gets depressedorino or suicidalorino" but never do it in a realistic or satisfying way. there's never enough buildup, and it starts with Maya in a worse mental state instead of building to get to that point and THEN having her getting better
though this could just be because people wanna include this stuff in their first works when they don't have the fundamentals, which is a common pitfall in writing
blud got banned for being a truecell o algx
wdym by birds and pots?
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