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>>136450
is sjef a homosexual
is sjef a homosexual
>>136453
obviously, he overcompensates by dating and having casual sex with a large amount of women.
obviously, he overcompensates by dating and having casual sex with a large amount of women.
>>136446
Sjef comes across as a porn addict who desires sex more than anything and id imagine any relationship he’d be in would just be him trying to get into bed, so I’d imagine him and Maya barely lasted a month
Sjef comes across as a porn addict who desires sex more than anything and id imagine any relationship he’d be in would just be him trying to get into bed, so I’d imagine him and Maya barely lasted a month
>>136461
somewhat unrelated, but i hate how Maya watches porn instead of reading it like most women do. its fairly obvious that Massa was projecting his own porn addiction onto Maya, yet he seemingly fails to understand that most women don't watch, they read, and i think it would've come across as being more authentic had he gone with that instead
somewhat unrelated, but i hate how Maya watches porn instead of reading it like most women do. its fairly obvious that Massa was projecting his own porn addiction onto Maya, yet he seemingly fails to understand that most women don't watch, they read, and i think it would've come across as being more authentic had he gone with that instead
>>136462
and if he went with that there wouldn't have been the joke of being caught watching porn, humor trumps authenticity for this show.
and if he went with that there wouldn't have been the joke of being caught watching porn, humor trumps authenticity for this show.
less brimmy headcanons, MORE ILLUSTRATIONS. GET TO WORK YOU LAZY FILIPINO SEANIGGER
>>136467
she couldve been reading some kind of historical fiction romance on her computer! then it'd MAKE SENSE for Coco to believe it's actual history
she couldve been reading some kind of historical fiction romance on her computer! then it'd MAKE SENSE for Coco to believe it's actual history
>>136489
it's not supposed to make sense, the point of the joke is the absurdity of the situation and the gullibleness of coco assuming the history tab of the browser is about history.
it's not supposed to make sense, the point of the joke is the absurdity of the situation and the gullibleness of coco assuming the history tab of the browser is about history.
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>>136443
What >>136444 said. When I tried to write Maya in my story, something clicked, and I don't care anymore if she hogs away the attention. I writing an Ongezellig story, >>(You) get an Ongezellig story.
>>136446
They dated, that's all you need to know for now.
>>136450
DO NOT FUCKING FALSEFLAG ME YOU NOPHONO. What I wrote is that Maya was the one who broke up with Sjef and it was going to be an entire subplot about how social anxiety and neuroticism self-sabotages relationships but there's currently no room for me to write that subplot in an already dense work about how institutions and gossip handle allegations.
>>136454
GEG
>>136468
Maybe. I wanna draw Rens' mom or something.
What >>136444 said. When I tried to write Maya in my story, something clicked, and I don't care anymore if she hogs away the attention. I writing an Ongezellig story, >>(You) get an Ongezellig story.
>>136446
They dated, that's all you need to know for now.
>>136450
DO NOT FUCKING FALSEFLAG ME YOU NOPHONO. What I wrote is that Maya was the one who broke up with Sjef and it was going to be an entire subplot about how social anxiety and neuroticism self-sabotages relationships but there's currently no room for me to write that subplot in an already dense work about how institutions and gossip handle allegations.
>>136454
GEG
>>136468
Maybe. I wanna draw Rens' mom or something.
>>136508
>that's all you need to know for now.
until you give us more details my headcannon of maya having embarrassingly low stamina for a libidinist and sjef having ED is cannon
>that's all you need to know for now.
until you give us more details my headcannon of maya having embarrassingly low stamina for a libidinist and sjef having ED is cannon
>>136535
nigga i am not going to fucking write that shit even in an adult AU
nigga i am not going to fucking write that shit even in an adult AU
>>136535
both gigagooners, completely desensitized to everything
both gigagooners, completely desensitized to everything
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Writing a Maya chapter as we speak. Deel V is the section revolving around the rumour mill, and Maya's chapter is the third party uninvolved. It's a character chapter. It's also going to be as long as the two chapters preceding it, if it matters.
>>136541
true for maya, but there's one thing sjef is not desensitized to: his true love, his highschool seatmate whom he just can't open up to.
true for maya, but there's one thing sjef is not desensitized to: his true love, his highschool seatmate whom he just can't open up to.
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>>136548
i remember reading the AO3 version and how Rens went to Efteling with Coco because Maya didnt want to go. im assuming that these are different visits?
also, not trying to convince you, but have you considered maybe just re-doing this from the ground up? i feel that it might be wise in order to prevent the story from feeling stitched together, or do you have a plan to prevent this from happening?
i remember reading the AO3 version and how Rens went to Efteling with Coco because Maya didnt want to go. im assuming that these are different visits?
also, not trying to convince you, but have you considered maybe just re-doing this from the ground up? i feel that it might be wise in order to prevent the story from feeling stitched together, or do you have a plan to prevent this from happening?
>>136548
>there’s now a maya/rens relationship
every combination of characters better have an established romantic history by the time you’re finished goontaneous or it’ll be very disappointing
>there’s now a maya/rens relationship
every combination of characters better have an established romantic history by the time you’re finished goontaneous or it’ll be very disappointing
>>136443
wait that's what the allegations were? i thought it had to do with Mymy getting hit with the bottle and her getting fired for it, and i didn't really know why rens was there tbh
wait that's what the allegations were? i thought it had to do with Mymy getting hit with the bottle and her getting fired for it, and i didn't really know why rens was there tbh
>>136554
if it isnt over 500k words with every characters backstories explained in excruciating detail with 700+ subplots, then i will be sorely dissapointed
if it isnt over 500k words with every characters backstories explained in excruciating detail with 700+ subplots, then i will be sorely dissapointed
>>136554
No nigger cringe shit that will unironically cause 12 years old to attach to it thanks
No nigger cringe shit that will unironically cause 12 years old to attach to it thanks
>>136554
rens and maya are just good friends. sjef trusts his best friend to not be with maya because
- he knows he and maya share a rather interesting history (im not spoiling)
- he also knows rens is too obsessed with vera (and has lingering attachments to *ilse, who is currently sjef's girlfriend) to give a fuck about maya
>>136568
Rens having a crush on a 40 year woman. tsmt, cause I did the same thing
Rens having a crush on a 40 year woman. tsmt, cause I did the same thing
>>136573
Nope, I mean it is hard to the cause most folks here in this thread are just called "zaryan". but I'm sorry for your confusion.
plus, I forgot to add the word "old".
Nope, I mean it is hard to the cause most folks here in this thread are just called "zaryan". but I'm sorry for your confusion.
plus, I forgot to add the word "old".
At this point I'm gonna have to namefag because of you falseflaggots
>>136568
The entire premise of my work is that Rens has a crush on Vera AND Vera also has a crush on Rens
>>136568
The entire premise of my work is that Rens has a crush on Vera AND Vera also has a crush on Rens
>fanfic turns out to be just self-insert masturbation material for goontaneous
j-just shut it down...
j-just shut it down...
>>136576
My book is a direct nod to A Catcher In The Rye but Holden Caulfield is a teacher (in terms of 'so much shit happens in a day')
My book is a direct nod to A Catcher In The Rye but Holden Caulfield is a teacher (in terms of 'so much shit happens in a day')
>>136583
NIGGA YOU SAID IT WAS THE FUCKING BOTTLESMACK I THOUGHT THOSE WERE THE ALLEGATIONS
NIGGA YOU SAID IT WAS THE FUCKING BOTTLESMACK I THOUGHT THOSE WERE THE ALLEGATIONS
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He LITERALLY calls her a pedophile in the placeholder and you guys are somehow shocked that I'm writing about something mature?
>>136585
WHERE NIGGA WHERE?! WHY IS IT NOT MENTIONED IN THE DESCRIPTION? WHY IS THE BOTTLESMACK THERE INSTEAD? DOES THE BOTTLESMACK EVEN HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH IT?
I'm just saying id like for the description to at least make it more obvious, because nothing about it hints that that will be what this story is about
WHERE NIGGA WHERE?! WHY IS IT NOT MENTIONED IN THE DESCRIPTION? WHY IS THE BOTTLESMACK THERE INSTEAD? DOES THE BOTTLESMACK EVEN HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH IT?
I'm just saying id like for the description to at least make it more obvious, because nothing about it hints that that will be what this story is about
>>136584
That was the initial impression, yes, and I intended that for the placeholder specifically, so I can make you THINK it was that, but in my current manuscript that has been largely abandoned because I've expanded the narrative so much for the bottle smack to just be the starting gun for everything else. I'm actually writing about that as I also try to respond here
That was the initial impression, yes, and I intended that for the placeholder specifically, so I can make you THINK it was that, but in my current manuscript that has been largely abandoned because I've expanded the narrative so much for the bottle smack to just be the starting gun for everything else. I'm actually writing about that as I also try to respond here
>>136585
i dont care about it being mature, id just would've preferred that it was told to me (or better hinted at) that this would be what it was about
i dont care about it being mature, id just would've preferred that it was told to me (or better hinted at) that this would be what it was about
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