Ongezellig

>>109537
thanks for the fixs BTW

I thank no, cause the "real" Epke noticed that Maya liked the same music as him. so start a conversation with her.
but it's weird that Maya fantasize about him, maybe she over thought it and kept on remembering him, so that could be why he is in Maya's daydreams.

I think he said see you later because it was the polite thing to say after watching someone spill that much spaghetti over themselves. And he started the conversation cause he had never met another Death Grips fan. Epke seems like a normalnigger and can probably do better (from his perspective) than a weird greasy haired girl on the bus who might already be in an open relationship.

>>109541
you forgot the fact that epke is a MAN and we're all equally attracted to mentally ill women

>>109542
depends what mental illness they have.
Maya has ADD, autism, and socially anxiously, but how is Epke supposed under Maya has all that when all he sees to a girl listening to Music on the bus!!

>>109539
I don’t think Maya would try talking to Epke again after the bus without some huge character development, but I think he is one of her imaginary friends because he is definitive proof to her that there are people around that have similar interests. So it lingers in her head, that if she just tried talking to people and reaching out more she could actually make a friend. That knowledge probably makes her miserable because now on top of feeling lonely she feels guilty knowing she is at least partly to blame for it, and she still feels incapable of doing the reaching out that would be needed, making her feel even more guilty.
<but loneliness is an extrovert conspiracy

>>109542
This is not the average normalnigger mindset sadly

>>109544
I think that character development would have to come mainly from Maya herself with Coco pushing Maya towards a new goal. but of course Maya doesn't like Coco for reasons such as thinking of Coco as her replacement (same with mymy), Coco (and mymy) connecting with people, and (this for a joke) going outside. this would logically make tension since Maya hates herself so much that she would rather not be Maya (this was in Mayamails BTW).
I wish Massa Continued the show still.

>>109542
>you forgot the fact that epke is a MAN and we're all equally attracted to mentally ill women

>>109546
Yeah I agree I just didn’t want to say it would be totally impossible for Maya to ever try talking to Epke again, but he would obviously not play a role in Maya’s struggle to deal with her anxiety. Any development in this regard would need to be about Maya’s personal inner growth and how her sisters affect or ideally, help her during. And yeah the Mayamails do a good job showing the extent of Maya’s guilt and self loathing. Unfortunately if Massa did continue it he would’ve just ruined it out of spite, so it’s up to us to keep the ‘lig alive.

>>109550
i should write a fanfic about them getting together, but its not pedophile troonslop and actually good

>>109550
I do think Coco would be the biggest pusher, Mymy second, then maybe others. and Massa would find a way to fuck shit up in the end.
Also Ongezellig media goes from great (true gems/zems) to horrable (aka "that's enough internet for today")
and it's our responendabty to keep Ongezellig alive
we have great people working on Ongezellig media (like Onion Dweller)
>>109551
and you go write that fanfic. made trash or make it a true gem, I would love to read it.

>>109551
I think it would be more interesting to write about how Maya is even able to get to the point where she could be in a relationship than about the relationship itself. Otherwise it would probably just end up as Epke rescuing Maya from her problems like a white knight which I think is usually an uninteresting story. There was a fanfic being discussed in the fic thread last week where this played out but with Roos instead of Epke, and it suffered from the same problem, on top of being essentially yuricoal.

>>109553
Luv me dweller

>>109554
agreed, but it depends how you write. I write about the Schoppenboer sisters cause we know the most about them. we don't know much about the other characters other than what Massa said about them or we just make stuff up ourselves.

>>109553
im actually in the process of writing something else, but i might write it when i become more experienced (no im not brian griffin, im actually writing something)
<its based off the episode concept where coco beats the shemmy out of Mayas bully cuz its funny or whatever

>>109554
thats the part that'll make it hard, though. trying to figure out how to get maya to a point where she can even talk to someone, let alone get together with someone

>>109557
I would love to read that. (maybe put it animated form?)so when your finished please post the link

>>109558
sometimes you just got to say "fuck it, they're goin' to Arkansas" (IDK why I choices Arkansas) and write form there

>>109559
ok, im about 3/4ths of the way done with the first draft, and hope to have it done by the end of october.

its probably gonna be coal, but my goal was to just make it so it wasnt completely and utterly unbearable to read (like total opposites or a different look at life or 10 dutch days)

>>109560
theres only so much you can do with that, because the reader will know the author forced it and itll take them out of the experience

>>109558
Yeah it is hard trying to write Maya overcoming her problems in a convincing way, but I feel like that’s what makes a well written fic so compelling. And writing anything about a Maya relationship without first having her deal with those problems feels like putting the horse before the cart to me. But please share anything you write in the fic thread, I would love to read it.

>>109560
Arkansascord is very active tonight clearly

>>109563
ok, but dont expect the epke thing for a while, i wanna write a few more things before i tackle that (and itll probably take me solving my own problems first so i can get a grasp as to how itll work)

>>109563
also are you reffering to this thread?
>>104616

>>109565
No I don’t care about the epke thing, I think there are much more interesting things in zellig to write about, but whatever it is you do decide to write, it is always great to share it. Good luck with the writing and the problems zaryan.

>>109566
Yeah that’s the one I was thinking of, I’m sure there are other, older fic threads thoughbeit. Maybe even a workshopping thread somewhere, or one could be started.

>>109567
>No I don’t care about the epke thing, I think there are much more interesting things in zellig to write about, but whatever it is you do decide to write, it is always great to share it. Good luck with the writing and the problems zaryan.

COMPLETELY OFF TOPIC:

but i think Massa handled Mayamail kinda poorly. having Maya say that Coco is "blackmailing her" i find to be kinda unrealistic. people of this mental state tend to do nothing but blame themselves for everything.

>>109561
I can't wait til October now, I would love to see your character development of Maya
>>109562
it's normally used it machinimas, but you can still used to write and it can be more local like Maya grandparents.
>>109563
I do like thinking that Coco is a ball pusher/ net positive for Maya. just by the way Coco deals with her past and carries herself. (we can properly write about how Coco suffers from PTSD)

>>109571
>I can't wait til October now, I would love to see your character development of Maya
Sorry but this ones more from the perspective of Coco, but it does change to Mayas perspective towards the end so i guess theres that

>>109570
Well Maya definitely does resent Coco for being Ms. Perfect, and to some degree thinks Coco’s attempts at getting her to socialize are designed to humiliate her. Maya probably does blame mostly herself for her problems but she thinks Coco has never tried to actually help her and has at times made them worse by forcing her into things.

>>109543
>ADD, autism, and socially anxious
Fake and gay Jewish terms

>>109560
I'm in your mind now nigga.

>>109572
Coco and Maya, well this will be wonderful when I read it. I would love to how you characterize the characters
>>109574
sorry,I mean peak, peak, and more peak

>>109575
Happens.

>>109571
Coco’s PTSD is probably a big part of why she and Maya can’t understand each other. For Coco missing out on things is painful because she misses her time with her family and never wants to waste time again with her new family and friends.
She thinks all Maya needs is some nudging in the right direction to appreciate family and make friends. But these efforts are misread by Maya as Coco belittling her and unfortunately will just push them further apart until they make more of an effort to understand each other’s problems.

>>109575
>The Arkansascord is real

>>109578
you. you understand, but how would they resolve it. my head it empty at the moment.

>>109578
PTSD is a fake and gay Jewish term that didn't exist before (((WWI))).

>>109579
No just me.

>>109581
Well whatever you want to call it, her family dying to a retarded deranged farm raiding lightning strike is clearly one of her major motivations.
And even if the term didn’t exist, people have had major psychological damage from violence and trauma for centuries.

>>109583
What about Medevil times?

>>109583
We should come up with something better then The Lighting Strike it's suck and there's no way one lighting strike could kill two people (I could be wrong).

>>109584
As far back as ancient Mesopotamia soldiers have been recorded having mental changes when returning to civilian life. I’m sure some medieval pikemen were never the same after seeing their friend flattened by a trebuchet.

>>109576
Well now I feel far more pressure geg (not really)

>>109587
that's good, I don't want to worry you.

>>109585
Apparently a lightning strikes can directly kill up to about 20 people semi regularly. It’s happened in Bangladesh and Africa a few times.

>>109589
but what would make Coco vulnerable. we do see that Coco doesn't like being called an orphan by Maya. so what would make Coco think of her parents (maybe the lighting strike). which then we can see how Maya would get closer to Coco.

>>109590
Interesting, thanks for the information.

>>109589
(sorry, post again,)
but what would make Coco vulnerable. we do see that Coco doesn't like being called an orphan by Maya. so what would make Coco think of her parents (maybe the lighting strike). which then we can see how Maya would get closer to Coco.

>>109591
(sorry, post again,and sorry for spam I'm being a retard right now)
but what would make Coco vulnerable. we do see that Coco doesn't like being called an orphan by Maya. so what would make Coco think of her parents (maybe the lighting strike). which then we can see how Maya would get closer to Coco.

>>109580
There’s the rub. The central issue of how to make two broken people understand each other when the ways they are broken make even understanding the way the other is broken extremely difficult. Lots of fics use Maya reaching some kind of breaking point and having an outburst, which is not necessarily a terrible explanation, but it usually is done poorly. I think Maya seeing Coco when she is vulnerable would crack her image in Maya’s mind and can be a good place to start looking. How or why this would happen and what it would look like, I have no clue.

>>109594
I’m a retard too I deleted the post and reposted it geg. Maybe Coco losing something, like a friend, would bring up her existential angst in a way that is not anger, and Maya could see it when it’s not pointed at her.

>>109595
but what would make Coco crack? I know it would properly do with her past.

>>109596
but which friend, maybe it's losing family?

>>109598
I meant more like a friend moving away, a bandmate maybe, and I don’t know if she has any family left to lose sadly unless Ravi, Soei, or Mymy is gonna be sacrificed for the sake of plot. I don’t think it even needs to be a substantial loss for it to affect Coco because of her relationship with loss, it could be trivial from Maya’s perspective which is why it might crack the princess image. Or maybe something Maya can relate to more, like what if Coco had a south african stuffed animal that was ruined somehow?

>>109599
from out of the band mates Yfke, Cleo, and Zoey. Yfke is the most likely to move away, properly back to Friesland. or maybe someone else but we don't know much about Coco's relations with the other classmates (I think)
and that South African Stuffed Animal could work depend how people would write.

also we do know a super tiny bit about one of the Schoppenboer sister Grandparents. but I don't see them dying since ravi and soei are in their 40s.

>>109600
I think it’s completely fair to write more for a character if you want to make them better friends with Coco in a fic, if you only stick to what is canon, then you couldn’t write anything new. The important thing is to keep new information grounded and have it be built off of what we DO know. We do know that Coco is friends to some extent with basically everyone in their class because Maya says not being Coco’s friend is an achievement.
I think it is Soei’s parents that run a store in the Mayamails because Maya says if she goes there during the party she will be getting unlimited spring rolls, but they don’t seem old enough to be dying of natural causes.

>>109601
we don't know their dynamic, so we have make up our own (examples Koos, Wiel, Adam,) which, what we know about, we can write about it, since the 'stereotypes'(I think stereotype is the right word here but tell me if I'm worng) would be bases for the characters themselves so we. and we have to make new characters sometimes (like Yana from Onion dweller) but we like you said "make them grounded" so them would fit the world and won't be self-insert characters(which are really boring and cliché). I mean we need more teachers than just Ms. Vera. (since most schools have more than one teacher.(I know obvious))

and no member of the Schoppenboer family would die at any point it's still too early.(which I hope I made clear)

>>109602
I think your feeling towards how to flesh out the other characters’ dynamics, making it grounded, and avoiding self insert slop already puts you ahead of a great majority of the fic writers bro

>>109604
yeah, I see self-inserts as "I hate my nigger life" type stuff or stuff which is useless. we have plenty of character to use and since Massa wouldn't make more epsodes, it's up to us to make new Ongezellig content.
and thank you.

>>109606
Trvth orbital strike.

I want to make a Sinterklass video super badly

>>109537
It's the self insert of a dirtskin from Egypt, what do you think?

>>109541
niggers be spazzing out over one line of dialogue that doesnt prove anything

>>109563
if i were to write the ending i'd make it more about maya finding the first step to overcoming her problems, or i'd do a 180 and have her get worse. either way the ending needs to imply change, not go through the full process of it

>>109570
nigga the characters are overexaggerated, thats the point

>>109585
Plaasaanvalle is a far better one

>>109586
Just did some more research, and wow, this raisin is pretty interesting.

>>109590
>Zeus kills shitskins for fun
geg

>>109627
I agree that implying change works very well as an ending, because all we need to see is that Maya is now capable and wants to do it, and I assume this is how Massa would’ve ended it. In a fic this helps keep the scope limited and therefore she can be written more consistently. But the idea for Maya ending by getting worse is straight from satan.

>>109641
< But the idea for Maya ending by getting worse is straight from satan.
Hope, she doesn't go too far

>>109626
Idk which line you mean specifically but I just don’t think there is any evidence Epke likes Maya from a 40 second interaction on the bus where she acts like a retard

>>109643
(be nicer to Maya :( )

>>109641
you might be right, but her story doesn't read conclusive to me. i can imagine her loneliness would either consume her like it already is or she'd gain a more realistic perspective, and have that be the start of her building some sort of life for herself, kind of like what watamote did. but she's too static for a traditionally bad or happy ending.

>>109644
I love Maya I’m not trying to be mean to her, but there is no reason Epke would walk away from that thinking Maya is anything but totally cringe.

>>109647
My thought is that if her loneliness is still consuming her, then her story really hasn’t been even partly resolved. She could become more like Zoey, where she remains quiet and introverted but no longer hates herself for it. But I agree a normal happy/bad ending doesn’t really make a ton of sense, and leaving it somewhat open is better.

>>109648
no he'd think she's a based schizo autist cutie and make plans to go to rape city with her

>>109649
yeah i'll admit im romanticizing her loneliness a bit

>>109651
Happens to everyone, many such cases

>>109650
that's weird, but sort of true.

One challenge when writing someone like Maya getting better is the fact that, people in this mental state think that they are undeserving of love. When it’s given to them, they feel ashamed, like they shouldn’t have been loved because they don’t offer anything to anyone. Or any act of love is so foreign to them, it’s treated as hostile

>>109739
You can't simply write someone like Maya, you have to be a Maya or it'll come off as a grift by someone who has never endured those hardships. That's why Ongezellig can't be replicated but by the hand of Massa, and not even the present-day Sam, we need the incel sore loser who browsed imageboards Sam

>>109757
>we need the incel sore loser who browsed imageboards Sam
Ongezellig was written by the married Sam though

>>109764
you can be married and a sore loser at the same time

>>109765
Example: Doll

>>109765
Still not incel

>>109768
he will always be an incel

>>109757
funny thing is, I kinda am like Maya (not kidding, I have mental issues that I really need to resolve GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEG)

>>109806
this is a website for mayas albeit

>>109806
Autism Denial Disorder?

>>109542
>"mental disorders are so cute" niggers when its a 30 year old man attacking their neighbor because they think hes gonna kill them because he hallucinated aliens in his room telling him, and not a shy chick with a pink sketch book

>>109808
>>109806
Autism Denial Disorder?

Mental disorders are actually jewish since (((they))) suffer from those the most

>>109820

>>109820 (Me)
>>109822

>>109820

>>109825
found a pic of je

>>109827
Who de foek is Je

>>109831
ye=je

>>109832
Oh I thought you were implying "jew"

>>109833
Jews are the worst, why would I compare my fellow Zaryans to Jews?

>>>109834
>Jews are the worst, why would I compare my fellow Zaryans to Jews?

>>109835

>>109834
Idk, can dyslexia be the reason?

>>109837
sure

>>109757
not to be an arrogant asshole or anything, but this is kinda why I feel like im pretty qualified to write about someone like maya, because ive been through what shes been through (and still am going through)

There's a certain kind of brimpost that /co/ used to make and it involved a giant Maya and Epke, so yes

>>109931
Wat?

>>109935
It involved a giant Maya
And a very small Epke
Coswork would have liked it

>>109931
>There's a certain kind of brimpost that /co/ used to make and it involved a giant Maya and Epke, so yes

>>109937
>>109935
its on AO3 (DO NOT READ IT)

>>109931
>>109937
why would you even mention that

giant maya

>>109940
marge

>>109942
no

>>109769
depends, is he one of those soycucks or does she actually like him

>>109588
Ok so I completely scrapped everything in my story and am rebuilding it from the ground up because what I wanted to do changed so drastically, the early chapters made no sense. So it’s probably gonna take a lot longer, but will be far better as I want to implement a consistent theme for my future works to build off of

>>110248
that's wonderful, take your time, and I will read it when your finished, no hurry in greatest.

>>110250
Replied in less than 2 minutes award
>giga.png

>>110250
It was initially supposed to be one little story, but I realized that I could just use this as a beginning, I began to add in more things until none of it made sense as the initial draft didnt account for any of it.

Writing it hard

>>110256
*writing is hard

>>110256
>>110257
Writing is hard, you have to come up with a lot of stuff and work with it to make the story.

Isn’t this just basic human interaction nigga

>>110265
>person who hasn’t written anything in his life award

>>110268
I think he’s talking about the original post about Maya and Epke being normal human interaction, not about the writing discussion the thread has become.

>>110273
he forgor the two right arrows and the numbers

>>110274
Occasionally I do the same thing and just reply to the thread instead of replying to the OP, without knowing the thread has changed topic at that point.

>>110273
I love when threads do that geg

>>110250
since I’m a lazy fuck and have barely gotten anything done, im taking a break from this project and doing a short, simple one so I can hopefully motivate myself to continue with the original. I’m not spoiling cuz it’s probably gonna be done my the end of the week

>>110277
that's okay, I'll still love to read it and this shorter one, remember please post both here.

>>110759
ok so im making 2 short stories. im making a continuation of Mayamail which WILL BE DONE BY THE END OF THE WEEK, BECAUSE I DONT HAVE TO WRITE FUCKING DIALOUGE

>>111975
im not going to make any promises on the other one

>>111975
>>111976
I hope you finish all your work, and remember to post them link here when your finished, I'd love to read what you've writen

>>112008

>>112009
yay

>>112012
>yay

>>112008
gotta love ADHD cuz my initial idea for the Coco Cures Bullying thing somehow managed to evolve into what is essentially the outsiders. I haven’t written anything yet, as I am focused on getting these two short stories done before I get to work on what will probably be the length of a novel. I’ll work as much as I can as marching band season has been kicking my ass and taking away my free time, so I probably won’t get them out until like November (geg all you want about me doing Marching Band but we’ve won more trophies than our football team)

>>112196
I hope you finish your these stories I'll love to read them, and I love marching bands and bands in general, and I also play an instrument, I play piano.
and I know it is hard to focus but keep up the great work, I hope you manage and pull though.

>>112198
thanks saar

>>112198
ok change of plans. im writing the first chapter of my outsiders knockoff and will leave it alone until i come back to it whenever. i feel like this is the best course of action as its the main thing on my mind right now, and restraining myself from being able to write it just seems rather stupid to me

>>112454
new project are always nice, just make sure to finish.because it seems you procrastinating a little, but I hope you finish all you're project.

>>112455
i think i am procrastinating, but ive found a program that locks my pc aside from specific websites and apps, so ill be using that to force myself to write (after i do my SNCA homework that will tank my grade if i dont do them)

>>112466
Using parental controls on yourself is very aryan

>>112466
that's great, to control yourself and force (and focus on your studies), I'll still love to read your work when you're finished. knock one down so you can do the rest

>>112469
i feel like itll be a domino effect, where im like "ok fine ill write" and the more i write, the less likely ill ne finding excuses not to write, which leads to more writing, you get the picture

>>112483
I understand, just make sure your finish. for me at least, I really want to read your work

>>112484
i wont disappoint (as for the quality, i cant promise anything)

>>112485
ok can i promise it wont be completely unbearable like 10 Dutch Days or A Different Look At Life, I can guarantee that

>>112485
>>112486
I read worst than 10 Dutch days, so anything better than that is like gold.

>>112487
yeah i really dont understand how those predditors call 10 dutch days "peak"

>>112488
they don't read good media sadly.

>>112484
k so i got a page of the draft done in... 2 hours...
granted i did keep re-writing, which you really shouldn't do until the editing phase, but I did it anyway.
ill keep updating you on progress so i can have the incentive to keep writing

>>112542
that's wonderful, can't wait to read or reread it, and keep up with the updates and remember to post it here when you're finished and I can't wait to read it. (I think I could write this better but still I love to read it)

>>112543
yes saarino

>>112543
ok I VVILL write today, but it’ll probably be only a couple paragraphs, as I won’t be home until pretty late and will likely be very tired and not want to do too much, but I’ll see how it goes

>>112618
can't wait to see it.remember to set your priorities. I hope you finish soon.

>>112618
ok nevermind im fucking exahusted.
though ill get home at 12 PM tomorrow because i have PSAT so ill probably get 2 pages done tomorrow (or more if I unbind my delete key)

>>112646
i got roughly a page done (one paragraph was written out of order because i feared id forget what i wanted to write if i didnt write it down immedietly) hoping to get it around halfway done tomorrow. friday and saturday are going to be a shitshow so im probably not going to get much writing done

>>112738
it's always good to hear the new information, you give, I can't wait to read and reread it. hope you finish, and keep up with the update, also be prepared for your Friday and Saturday (this is a really useful tip),

>>112741
>it's always good to hear the new information, you give, I can't wait to read and reread it. hope you finish, and keep up with the update, also be prepared for your Friday and Saturday (this is a really useful tip),
also coco peeb WABAG

>>>112738
>it's always good to hear the new information, you give, I can't wait to read and reread it. hope you finish, and keep up with the update, also be prepared for your Friday and Saturday (this is a really useful tip),

>>>112741
>>it's always good to hear the new information, you give, I can't wait to read and reread it. hope you finish, and keep up with the update, also be prepared for your Friday and Saturday (this is a really useful tip),
>also coco peeb WABAG

>>112754
>>112755
>most obsessed nigger award

>>>112754 (You)
>>>112755 (You)
>>most obsessed nigger award

>>112741
ok so i finished the first scene of 3. the second one is the longest, and the third is the shortest, so the draft will probably be done by wednesday.
actually im going to set that deadline, im gonna get it done before then or on that day just because i should probably set deadlines so i can actually write more

>>112882
so I will expect this by wednesday? that sooner than I thought, I glad for you are keep up with the information.
setting deadlines is always wonderful and make sure you're prepared for the future

>>112885
nononono i will have the draft done by then
idk how long editing will take, probably a week or more

>>112887
cuz i dont wanna just look at it and say "eh good enough" and just post it, because thats how you get 10 Dutch Days

>>112885
what i meant by "get it done" was the draft, not the final product. sorry that i was a bit unclear on that

>>112885
sorry for getting your hopes up

>>112885
updootorino or whatever, but i am currently half-way done with the DRAFT of the second scene
I say I again, I am DRAFTING right now. When the draft is done, THEN I will set a deadline for when I want the FINAL VERSION (of this chapter) out

>>112887
>>112888
>>112890
>>112892
>>112928
Sorry about not reply, internet when out (it really late at night). but nice to know that the draft of the first scene is done is your half way though the second scene. and thanks for clarify what you said. anyways I can't wait to read and reread your work.

>>112930
thanks saar

>>112930
ok, so ive set a deadline for it to be actually done, november 10th. i chose this day specifically because 1. i didn't know you had to wait like 10 days for you to get an AO3 account. and 2. it'll be the first time ill have a bunch of free time since the beginning of the month

>>112990
okay, so that's the date is going to be finished? if so make sure to post the link here when you're finished. anyway I still can't wait to read your work since the date is becoming ever closer. I'm so excited.

imagine theres nothing imagine he didnt write anything and hes just been lying that would be so geggy

>>112993
>another project cancelled out of spite again
im tired zootler...

>>112993
i am NOT doing that

>>112991
it will be finished by that date (doe if i finish before the 6th, i wont be able to post it because ao3 account bs)

>>112994
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>>112998
I'm so excited. yay

>>112999
Stupid discord pisscel nazi go back to 'cord

>>112999
what does xhis mean

>>112990
ok so apparently i have NYTL (boy scout SNCA that i dont wanna do) for 2 weekends after the 1st, so i dont even get a weekened. fuck this.
though i dont have practices anymore, so hopefully that will make up for the fact that no writing will be able to get done on the days where im supposed to have free time (unless i can find a way out of it because i honestly hate boy scouts and dont want to be in it)
ill try my best to get it out by the 10th still, but it might have to be pushed back a couple days

>>113141
(though i could just write on my phone cuz its a doc, and ill hopefully be writing a lot more because ill be so bored out of my mind and have to find something to do)

nigga is a boyscout HAHAHHAHHAHHAHAHA

>>113141
Scouting is keyed, it’s a shame they let in foids

>>113142
doe now that im thinking about it, since ill have the draft done on wednesday, it shouldn't influence the overall editing thing all that much (hopefull) as itll just be about re-wording/re-writting paragraphs, so it shouldn't affect it that much

>>113144
foids won doe

>>113143
isnt that rule 8 break or however im obsessed with rules

>>113144
>2020+5
>doing literally any outdoors activity
NGMI

ok
so i finished the 2nd scene, and i've realized that the 3rd scene should probably be in the second chapter, as 1. it would make the ending of chapter 1 more impactful (in my opinion), and 2. it'd just be a more natural conclusion, as i wanted chapter 2 to lead off of what was going to happen in that 3rd scene
so draft done! im going to take a break for today as ive been writing for 3 hours and am frankly exahusted, but hopefully ill be able to get this story out by the tenth, and maybe even before if im extra productive
i honestly think i might just continue writing this thing instead of those other stories i wanted to write (though i may write the mayamail one and lead it into this story like a prequal of sorts)
>thousand yard stare of a writer

>>109817
also this is le keyed

>>113223
correction:
i feel like putting it in the second chapter would just feel more natural, as having the third scene in chapter 1 and then having it end abruptly just seems weird

>>113223
>>113231
I am getting closer and closer to reading this great story. I'm so excited to read you're work.

>>113232
thank you saar

>>113232
i edited a whole 2 paragraphs, but theyre a LOT better than the outline so it was worth it

>>113307
we have moved on to the editing fades. I am so excited cause we get closer and closer to the date when it drops. you cannot believe how excited and stellar I fell right now. keep up the good work, and keep with the updates.

>>113309
sorry i uploaded the wrong image geg

>>113310
I understand, but still keep up the good work.

>>113308
kys mayagod tripfag tranny

>>113308
gemmy image

>>113314
most schizophrenic retard award

>>113317
i just checked your ip and your ip is the same

>>113321
and you did that how exactly?

>>113321
questions. questions.

>>113330
geg

k, so i ended up inadvertenly creating the motif of the story after making a metaphor to something, and decided to expand upon it. funny what can come to your mind at random?
anyway, I got through 2 PARAGRAPHS in JUST TWO HOURS.
when i get home, ill see if i can write a third.
this might be done sooner than i think, though i will go back and edit this edit just to get it that little bit better

>>113383
Gemmy png

>>113383
keep with the updates, I love hearing about them

>>113383
i wasted 2 hours trying to write a paragraph that wasnt working, and just cut it completely. so yeah im fucking exhausted right now, but ill hopefully get another paragraph done later

>>113383
I also found that the motif was stupid (though it might come back at some point)

>>113486
>>113491
I love hearing about the editing faze of your project, because it tell me, I get closer to reading it. keep up with the updates.

>>113497
ok i didnt get much done today, but i was pretty exhausted so ill probably pick up the pace tomorrow

>>113223
i just looked back at the thread and realized that i started this 10 days ago... and finished the draft 3 days ago...
i genuinely thought id been working on this draft for a month
thoughbeit i had been working on other crap then did this cuz it was cool or whatever

>>113500
that's okay, enjoy the rest of your day or night, I hope I you continue.
>>113501
time flies bye when your having fun. anyways nice work.

>>113502
"fun" is a bit of a stretch, but id be lying if i said i didnt enjoy it somewhat (though trying to find the words can be mindnumbing to the point where i get PHYSICALLY UNCOMFORTABLE because im just sitting there trying to figure out the words)

>>113503
yay, I normally look at synonyms and antonyms for words, when I get stuck or curious.

>>113503
":3" writer albeit

it’s not even halfway through the school day and I’m already having a really shitty day. I have marching band practice right afterwards so probably no writing today
I don’t know why I feel like this, but writing will probably make it far worse than it already is so I won’t until im back to normal

>>113540
there is always tomorrow for writing.

>>113544
I guess that’s true

>>113540
Geg I didn’t take my meds today that’s why

got the first dialogue interaction done, though not much more than that. i might write more, i might not, idk

Why does mayaFAIL make shit up about his life. Swarthy larper that pretemds to be a white highschool kid that does boyscouts and band practice, add on to this the other identities he makes up like darkwolf and shit

mayaFAIL please bury a bunch of landminds in your backyard then run around your backyard with a blindfold on until you explode

>>113713
>Why does mayaFAIL make shit up about his life. Swarthy larper that pretemds to be a white highschool kid that does boyscouts and band practice, add on to this the other identities he makes up like darkwolf and shit

>>113713
bob can you explain to this obsessed nigger the think with darkwolf cuz i asked you the same bs when i was namefagging as mayaGOD

>>113713
coconiggerfail unable to comprehend mayaGODS living actually healthy and good lives

>>113718
something about passphrases being forced? idk i was too retarded to understand it. i VVILL NOT be accused of being an obbsessed predditor who types paragraphs of schizobabble SNCA

>>113719
>NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOURE A MAYAFAIL YOU CANT BE HEALTHY AND HAPPY-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>113717
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>>113721
mental breakdown sperge retard thank you for proving me right. nigga you used the same trip between larps nobody is cracking your tripcode to larp as you. you are a 14 year old retarded nigger baby

please purchase a spaceship and launch into outer space then open the airlock so you are ripped out and explode mayaFAIL

>mental breakdown sperge retard thank you for proving me right. nigga you used the same trip between larps nobody is cracking your tripcode to larp as you. you are a 14 year old retarded nigger baby

>>113722
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>>113727
bob can't save you from me swarthy nigger I know what you are mayaFAIL baby stop the larp

>>113732
>me when i realize that im never going to change your mind so i should just give up and laugh at the seethe you make any time i post
>also how, in the end, it really doesnt matter. who cares if i really WAS being an obsessed nigger typing SNCA? who cares if im a mayaFAIL? who cares if im making shit up about myself? proving any of it wrong just distracts me from my writing, so i will be doing that instead of wasting my time on an obsessed schizo

>>113735
Me. I care.

if your fanfic is anything like your darkwolf persona's analysis or your weird fantasies of your personal life then me thinks the press will not be so kind with their reviews

>>113740
if my writing is like darkwolfs fantasies then i give you permission to blow my fucking head off

okay writing will be delayed, heres the reason:
i just shit all down my pant leg and i put my hand down there to check and now theres shit on my hand and i just fucking scratched my face so now theres shit on my face fuck my LIFE. i wish i could just eat a hand grenade and explode and i can't do multiplication

i think i just heard my mom get home and i have to leave for taekwondo class in 10 minutes but IM COVERED in my own fucking SHIT fuck fuck i cant let her see me like this its in my fucking hair WHAT

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>>113744
Gem. I didn't know you could write this good

>>113745
ITS NOT MY FUCKING BOOK ITS AN EMERGENCY mom brought home her boyfriend daequan who was meant to drive me to taekwondo class and i tried to open the door to get to the bathroom before they got inside but the handle was too slippery due to all the feces and now i just fell into shit thats on my floor and its all over my plushies and fDFGJK. if daequan opens my door and sees me rolling around in my own FUCKING FECES i will have to go back to the disability caring facility

>>113743
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>>113746
mayaFAILS are literally incapable of even making it to the toilet. when I say you should explode I don't mean you should make a diarrhea explosion.

>>113743
>>113744
>>113746
ohnono mayafails why so brappy?

>>113748
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>>113745
>>113744
>>113743
cocofail cord falseflagging award

mom is taking away all my devices im sorry everyone i cant continue writing for this project. i can still smell feces in my room and i cant stop crying. daequan said i only have 5 more minutes to text all my friends before mom is taking it away. learn from my mistakes everybody now you know why im suicidal

>>113751
thats okay we understand

>>113751
Wat de foek? D:

Ob

>>113751
we zaryans have obsessed parents wtf?

>>113743
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>>113751
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>>113743
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>>113751
>IM MAYAFAIL, IM A USELESS WRITERFAIL
>IM MAYAFAIL, IM FAT AND LAZY AND EAT LIKE SHIT
>IM MAYAFAIL AND I HAVE OBSESSED PARENTS

I'm glad I don't get it at all.

I dislike how this thread has changed, but I still like it, I have been writing a story but I think it's too cringe to release to the public. but I will continue to develop upon it, for my writing practice. and it also helps me animate too, but it's still bad, but when it develops into something I think is alright for others to see, I may release it here.
so keep writing, keep animating, make coal to make zems in the future.

>>113768
>too cringe
Mf we’re writing Fanfiction of a SNCA Dutch cartoon, and your worried about if it’s cringe? ITS GONNA BE BE DEFAULT

>>113768
also you can’t improve without feedback, so I’d like to read it please

>>113768
just read it again, ANIMATE? What do you animate?

>>113785 it's pretty much Coal or tests, I won't release them cause they suck, makes for good practice, though.

I got my phone back but today I shit my pants in clown school. It might sounds like a joke but it's not. We were practicing on riding unicycles and I wasn't wearing my diaper because I thought I would be okay. Needless to say I made a fool out of myself today and not in the way I was meant to. Im a human fucking failure I guess thats why Maya and I are kindred spirits. I had to wait there by myself with shit stains all over the rented clown suit while I waited over an hour for Daequan to pick me up. Fuck my life.

>>113850
shit happens mayaGOD dont stress over it too much, we're all gonna make it. clean yourself up and move forward

>>113850
KYS pajeet

>>113852
writerGOD has autism leave him alone, don't act like you've never soiled yourself. clown school can be quite stressful let off him

>>113853
send him to the camps or the showers

>>113854
have you considered

>>113850
I’d be mad, but they’re kinda funny to read so just keep making them o algo

>>113861
question what do you think of this image, writerGOD

>>113743
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>>113850
>im sorry guys my pajeet brother logged onto my computer while i was gone
<what are you doing big brother- >GO TAKE A SHOWER, YOU SMELL LIKE SHIT

>>113862
i think its gemmy, we need more henk art

>>113867
WriterGOD what do you think of Mymy's petition?

>>113869
i think killing an entire minority would drastically disrupt the economy (even if most of them dont have jobs)

>>113866
I really laughed at those posts when I realized it all was a joke haahhsjshshshshsh

>>113872
Clown school was the funniest imo

>>113871
its some obsessed weirdo pretending to be me, im just leaning into the joke because i ALSO found these to be quite, how predditors say, humourus

>>113870
WriterGOD what do you think of PEEBs, I like them :3

Uhm ok¿

>>113876
i think theyre cool, there should be more of them
>>113873
trvke

>>113878
gem

>>113876
ive always wondered how nobody has made a peeb version of the class portrait? it just seems so obvious yet nobody has done it yet

>>113882
it's forced cord coal

>>113884
>i like this thing
<you cant >awww...

darkwolf is a peebcel nigga there has never been a poster that has been so raped

mayafail please find an old building that is about to be blown up by a demolition team and paint yourself to camoflage with a wall so the demolition team okay the site and set off the tnt so you explode

>>113925
>ok guys i did a little writi-
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>ok guys i did a little writi-
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>>113823
admitted to making coal award

>>113960
hey wait a minute i think i remember something similar happening before it's the same 5 cords the same 5 cords on soyzellig.party they have the same 5 cords

>>113960
geg

>>113960
shut this glorified discord server down already

>>113971