No.127921[View All]
Hoi, Zaryans, it's me, Zaryan! I'd like to tell you guys I've been working in my free time from college on an Ongezellig adaptation, NOT a fiktie, and I will publish it here once I make some final proofreading, a promotional artwork, and it's cover. It's totally OC, I've been working on it nonstop, and it's been driving me insane ofzo
<leddit 'ace
Here's from my preface for it:
>This work—novelette, fanfic, chamber-piece, literary adaptation of an online web series—whatever it is of zoiets. It doesn’t fit in any of them because that’s the spirit of what I’m adapting from.
I had two premises in mind when it came to an Ongezellig adaptation:
1. What if the Bottle Smack in the Pilot had consequences?
2. How do I make a story out of it?
<'igle 'ogle 'ace
Let me know if you have questions about what it is. I will answer them honestly without spoling much o algugu
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>>130513You are a gift from God;
Will you also be publishing it in ebook format?
No.130516
>>130513Perfect reading material for me to read while being all alone on the staircase during lunch break, yes I like Maya
No.130532
>>130511I’ve read it once but it’s so dense, descriptive, and loaded with dutchness I want to read it again before I can discuss it intelligently. It’s very good but I’ll have more to say than that.
No.130535
>>130532Is it filled to the grim with dutchness?
No.130665
>>127921what the hell is your AO3 pfp saar
No.130683
>>130680yeah but what is it
or what was it because it got changed
No.130685
>>130665SAAR WHY WAS YOUR LAST PFP PORN SAAR
No.130687
>>130685FYM PORN IT WAS OCCOAL AT WORST
No.130688
What profile picture marge
No.130689
can't believe you OP, why would you do such a thing…
No.130702
>>130690Should have made it about Yana since she's the face of Ongezellig
No.130732
Kinda bored now that I've posted the entir thing. The prequel I had in mind can wait for now. What if I wrote a oneshot where Maya gets to be happy for once
No.130734
>>130732What if you wrote the continuation of one more drink or however the fuck it was called
No.130737
>>130735>holy nu lvrk moar It's an old old 'fic where Maya becomes an alcoholic, and it was premium kino nothing better at the time, probably still is. But it was discontinued around Chapter 40 and NEVER finished, if someone has the heart to send the archive so you can also read it
No.130738
>>130732publish the ebook version that you talked about
No.130741
>>127921I see. Am not finding it anywhere I look but Idk, can a Zaryan who has it 'chived poast it ofzo
>>130738I will. Had a reading session with my friends with it and it also functioned as proofreading. I noticed a few mistakes in thr ePUbs that I then corrected. I don't plan on publishing them yet because I still don't have a cover
No.130743
>>130741I’m not a big fan of it because of the epke romance and the derailing into a bootlegging crime story but it’s here
>>104682 No.130962
>>130743read it. took me a while since i was reading another fic (A Faded Tulip; it's decent but also too cheesy). it sucks ass lol
No.130994
>>130743This shit sucks ass nigga
No.131340
The current version on AO3 is currently outdated, and I will only update it if I can finally decide I'm done with it somehow. 5000 new words over a span of two days after careful deliberation and research, and there still might be more.
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>>131526Why? I liked the name, I thought it fit well.
No.131544
>>131528My novella is heavily dependent on musical architecture. Iets Waars didn't make sense because it's a thesis statement, not a title
No.131831
can someophono become my copyedtior? I dont have a 'puter with me and i wont be having it with me for the foreseeable future.
<wraak space
my manuscript for both editions is 35k and 39k respectively, whereas my epubs are only 23k and 26k, so yeah, ive added way too much content that is characterisation since im now leaning heavily into the character study/documentary farce
<wraak space
Ill append my email to a reply if someone agrees. they will be credited in my work if they help o algo. that's the least i could do
No.131893
>>131885Sending Deels n Boers to this email recipient
No.131894
>>131885dis the nigga dat drew 'p
No.131904
>>131894Obsessed with goontaneous award
No.131906
>>131885i will email you questionable content
No.131907
>>131904all my niggas rape and kill goontaneouspedos
No.132275
>>132257why are you not using LaTeX
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>>132275I'm not on Linux, xister. I started this all on Calbire, I can't shift now