No.104616[Last 50 Posts]
I recently dove cock first into fanfictions, most of them are vantablack niggerhell, but these are gemmies that YOU VVILL READ
Death & Reborn: A bone-chilling, spine-tingling, genre-redefining, character-driven ZEMERALD of Maya failing to ACK herself after feeling guilty for BEATING THE CLITTY OUT OF COCO or something:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/62666986/chapters/160421989Reunion: Takes place 10 years after the pilot or something with the family reuniting o algo, and Coco and Mymy get Maya to stop being a CLITTYCELL and go outside:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/64015864/chapters/164218912Hoi Maya: Maya ACKed herself and Coco keeps writing letters to her cause SHE WON'T TAKE HER MEDS!!!!!:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/67132486EVERYTHING ELSE I EITHER HAVEN'T READ OR IS VANTABLACK BRIMSTONE!!!!!
No.104617
>maya kills herself
>everyone hates maya
>maya kills herself… 2
drop DEAD
No.104618
>Maya ACKed herself and Coco keeps writing letters to her cause SHE WON'T TAKE HER MEDS!!!!!
this sounds very sad so i will NOT be reading actually
No.104634
Death and reborn was gemmy but it was rather sad and also the dialogue isn't that good
No.104637
>>104616We all know that the best one is One more shot
No.104642
>>104641its written like an english textbook for schools but it was a gem
No.104659
>>104642It was an ESL gem and it's such a shame that the author deleted it out of spite
No.104663
>>104637can I get a link to this shining ZEMMY
No.104686
>>104682cookie logger DO NOT CLICK
No.104696
"Hoi Maya" is some faggot's fetish, I read the whole thing and I regret it.
"Reunion" is boring.
"Death & Reborn" is interesting, I'll read this later.
No.104698
>>104696marge what fetish? i was just aboyt to start reading it cause it seemed the most interesting out of all three but im doubted now
No.104704
>>104698If you like the idea of girls suffering (because you're a clittycel), read it. S tier gooning material.
If you don't like that, there's not much reason to read it, it's not a hecking cautionary tale or anything.
It's just paragraph after paragraph of suffering with no real substance, and it feels like it was written to arouse sadists.
No.104706
>>104704We are dark triad here nigga take yo sensitive ass back to r/ongezellig
No.104707
>>104616holy shit jackowacko's two roses??
No.104713
>>104711wordswordswords and being a jew is aryan
No.104715
>>104714They probably say this.
<reddit spaceReading Death & Reborn and I'm starting to feel like everybody who likes this Dutch tranime is just a fucking dramaqueen.
No.104716
>>104715>I'm starting to feel like everybody who likes this Dutch tranime is just a fucking dramaqueen.Well even massa's inner circle were having 'cord drama among themselves way before soyteens found the show
No.104717
>>104716Man, what a great way to spend your shit life, being sad all the time, not pathetic at all.
Seriously, what is this? People need to learn to enjoy life every once in a while.
No.104812
>>104682was the last chapter that important?
No.104836
>>104812It was Mymy and a bunch of classmates playing HOI4 together and they finally brought up the fact that Maya was an unwholesome alcoholic, then it ends
No.104870
>>104616In general I think attempting/committing suicide is kind of a mischaracterization of Maya and Hoi Maya is excessively depressing. Reunion is actually a heart warming, soul touching, life affirming, eslGOD gem about the sisters’ love (if you can look past all of Mymy’s oc sailor friends). Thank you for the read zaryan.
No.104872
>>104870It's said and shown time and time again that Maya is a pussy and even in the worst cases she'd never actually put herself in a dangerous situation
No.104874
snca
No.104892
>>104888no it just fucking sucks
No.104932
>>104923Someone ought to continue that piece of kino in the same ESL style
No.104936
>>104935keep gooning to and propogating offsite tranny fanfiction, this is why the zarty is dead. everyone is an offsiter. everyone
No.104938
everyone is a soulless brown new shartycuck and maya has become the go-to self insert for invalid trannies and retarded chudcels alike for displaying how much they want to kill themselves. there's never been more 'zellig ackjaks on the catalog or index despite the zellig lee's who created them having dying out like all the other oldfags a long time ago. how is this possible? how did things get so brown and retarded? why is everyone so obsessed with suicide and abuse?
No.104945
>>104938>Words words words it's le overWell you see chud, chuds are normally incels and Maya fits that archetype perfectly.
>>104936And don't start on the off-siter thing, if we really have to be picky even one more shot wasn't made by us, take the oldfag glasses off for one second
No.104946
>>104938>why is everyone so obsessed with suicide and abuse?the first noble truth is that life is suffering o algo
No.104956
>>104954>xitter filename…
No.104957
>>104956geg chudquoters are xittergroids
No.104958
>>104957meds, i'm a chudquoter and i'm a cute trans girl that doesn't use xitter.
No.104962
>>104958Why did the shemmy have to shut down
No.104991
>>104836i should write the last chapter like the last episode of breaking bad. Maya just kills everyone in the alcohol gang or something and dies o algo
No.108219
>>107913i hated this because 1. literally everything prior to chapter 9 is completely fucking ignored, and 2. Roos has NO FUCKING REASON TO LIKE MAYA. 3. the formating is awful, niggerfag has never heard of the enter key. 4. the pacing is awful, maya just cut herself and her family saw it? welp its never addressed and her family NEVER BOTHERS TO FUCKING MENTION IT AGAIN
No.108255
>>108219yeah that's all a trvke, I like it mainly because it didn't take 2 weeks for every chapter to release and because it actually had some good length
No.108256
>>108219and the Roos part is so funny, it's obvious the author is self inserting as Maya and Roos is a way of fantasizing of being saved by a woman. He doesn't want to put effort into fixing himself so he fantasizes about being saved by some woman for no reason
No.108257
>>108256that's notably similar to fiction made by women where the female protagonist is sweeped off their feet by or fought over by big beautiful muscular men.
No.108260
>>108257yep, it's just immaturity in a text form
No.108263
>>108261Marge what’s 10 Dutch Days
No.108264
>>108263some plebbit fanfic on AO3 that take place in the future. coco is essentially maya now, and maya is somewhat like Coco now, but she still has anxiety. id maybe recommend reading it if your bored, but dont bother otherwise
No.108285
>>10826110DD is an example of ideaslop, it's all concept, no actually good writing just the "omg Coco is Maya and Maya is Coco" idea
No.108286
>>108285>10DDMarge explain now
No.108287
>>107913ive been reading this and its fine or something and also one of the lines is literally
>lesbians are awesome they are so wonderful its normal for a person to be a lesbian>>108256tsmt and maya is a SLF
No.108289
>>108287yeah the Roos part is easily the most coally and self insert thing imaginable
No.108310
>>108307it could have, but the author chose to fill it with retarded dialogue and SNCA that just dragged the story pointlessly
No.108312
>>108307Most of the dialogue is clunky and the Roos thing does feel forced but I can suspend my disbelief and say it is possible for Roos to have a crush on Maya. But the ending with the whole “it’s okay Maya you don’t have to make anymore actual progress on your struggles which has been the entire focus so far, I’ll just carry around a bag to baby you from now on” really fucking sucks and defeats the whole point of the story. Goes from iron to coal with the last chapter.
No.108313
>>108312that part genuinely pissed me off, the author actually want to be babied and treated like a child(not surprising for a troon), so they self insert as Maya
No.108346
>>108306think what happened is the author decided to private them like a SLF
Seasons 2 and 4 are seemingly lost but here's season 3(doe it's a pain to actually read because archive is being retarded, just screenshot it or something):
https://web.archive.org/web/20250607142254/https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ReWi4q0fpLO92o9B_aZrj1Bg8rG8PFNc/edit?tab=t.0 No.108349
>>108346that archive is dead
No.108355
>>108346opens with mymy getting shot. fucking gemmy
No.108360
>>108346this is actually so fucking gemmy
No.108361
>>108355Kys Mymyabuser, /mymycare/ won
No.108365
>>108349click the see other pages archived under this link or something
No.108373
>>108371Probably some weird nigga inserting themselves into relationships with the characters
No.108375
>>108371>>108373>newfags dont remember camJSID
No.108392
>>108387screenshotting gifs will always be a gem
No.108434
>>108409I also think he could be a good friendship for Maya but I don't know if they could have a relationship.
No.108441
>>108437
kill yourself yurifag fanficpedo
No.108443
>>108442
NOBODY is reading a full novel’s length worth of incestyurigarbage nigga
No.108447
>>108445It was actually pretty brave to post that knowing how everybody would react to yuripedoincest geg. I skimmed a few chapters and it is actually well written and seems more of an emotional examination than anything, but the sisters kiss so
IT IS FUCKING COAL No.108448
>>108447why is it 52 chapters. what do they do
No.108449
>>108448It seemed like a lot of shit about Coco’s band. Zoey’s mom has terminal aids or something and Zoey is glad she’s dying which sets off Coco’s PTSD. Coco cuts herself, she and Maya get close because Coco eases her anxiety and she eases Coco’s existential angst. But I only read half of like 4 chapters so take it with a grain of salt.
No.108455
>>108449i read the whole thing, and there was never a moment in it where i felt uncomfortable
No.108456
>>108447yeah its definitely more about the emotions than the love
No.108472
>>108460i do agree, but it never made me feel weirded out or grossed out, which i think is a massive accomplishment considering what it is
No.108473
>>108472>im not grossed out by incest therefore this yuri incestnegro coal is actually heckin good!i think youre just a fucking freak
No.108476
YuriWNBAG
No.108479
>>108477>muh heckin strawmango back to plebbit you fucking faggot
my point still stands, you complimented the incest fanfic while saying that the incest didnt gross you out at all. therefore i think youre an incest-loving retarded freak
No.108486
>>108482im sure the guy that has been talking about how much he loves this incest fanfic for the past 4 hours is purely baiting, and not doing it because he actually thinks the story is good or anything
No.108487
>>108480please tell me your point so i can read it and decide that it doesnt change anything and youre still a gross incestfag
No.108493
>>108487I think his point is that incest is always gross, but this story handles it in a way that is much less gross than usual. Or something.
No.108495
>>108493which means that his point is still shit. good to know
No.108496
>>108494Idk it didn’t seem like bait to me. I mean it is well written and it does deal with Coco’s PTSD in an interesting way. It’s a shame these authors can’t just reign it in a little bit.
No.108497
>>108495if you were expecting to be stabbed in the heart, only to see that you've been poked by a toothpick, you'd say "oh, that hurt but it wasn't as bad as i thought itd be"
No.108498
>>108492>>108494>the fanfic faggot used these exact 2 images yesterday>he also stopped replying to me as soon as you appearedthis is a very poorly done backpedal
No.108499
>>108496it be a lot better if they didn't kiss eachother, the hugging is fine because thats what family does
No.108500
>inb4 this thread has run its course
No.108503
>>108499Well cuddling may be a little beyond what family normally does but in their case I think it can make sense.
No.108506
>>108503i think it makes sense because Maya hasn't really had anyone, so her being clingy is accurate
No.108507
>>108504you both also type the exact same way and you both occasionally forget to use arrows when youre using a soi to make fun of somebody. you are horribly autistic and im not surprised youre trying to create an incest circlejerk hellhole
No.108508
>>108506Yeah and Coco is terrified of losing anybody again so holding can make her feel safe. But cuddling like that isn’t just normal family physical contact.
No.108524
the link to Hoi Maya is dead, anyone have a 'chive?
No.108527
>>108524summary: Coco essentially blames herself for Maya's ACKing. shes depresso espresso until maya's 19th birthday, where she gets shivers and believes that it was maya, and then she goes on the live a happy life because maya wants her to.
the last lines were something along the lines of "Maya and Coco are now in an eternal embrace, in a plane of existence beyond our understanding, their love dancing across the stars"
it was actually a really touching and sad story, which is why im so mad its been deleted
No.108528
>>108527I know the story I just want it for future rereading
No.108532
>>108527it's a good thing it got deleted albeit
No.108536
>>108526predditors are retarded
No.108540
>>108532Trvke, sorry to whoever liked it but it was overwritten depressing coal about suicide (despite that being shown as something Maya would not do) and then about her sisters suffering for the rest of their lives. There was nothing redeeming about Hoi Maya and nothing of value has been lost.
No.108544
my main problem was that it was way too dramatic, Coco does not obsess over Maya that much
No.108545
>>108543Yeah if you don’t want to read page after page of a girl’s anguish at losing family FOR THE SECOND TIME, you just don’t have an appreciation for real A24 kino like I do. Never mind that to even get to this point they had to hamfistedly put in a suicide that makes no sense with no explanation. That doesn’t matter, all that matters is the suffering!
No.108548
>>108526I've heard some of them stalk zarty, maybe they got rid of it because they don't want us to enjoy it(prime troon behavior)
No.108551
>>108547Whatever sadistfag. Enjoy never reading your lost mediarino brimstone again, while I have already ‘chived my hope filled gems of perseverance and triumph GEG
No.108565
i didn't take it down because you didn't like it you idiots, i took it down because *i* didn't like it
No.108576
>>108575i mean you can keep jerking off to the reality you made up in your own head i guess
No.108579
>>108577Being a SLF is aryan though
No.108581
>>108577why do you care so much about the existence of some shitty fanfiction of a mildly amusing webtoon? go read actual literature or something
No.108598
>>108574geg
>>108577it's a good thing it got deleted albeit
No.108708
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RKIaZEB_HSyJHl2_IyQl8c6EZ7y89sPu/edit GGGGGGEEEEGGGG discovered some gigacoal.
Basically it's a yurislop fic where Cleo likes Coco and wants to get with her so she threatens Mymy and tells her not to spend time with Coco. Later on it's revealed that Cleo's behavior is because her dad is abusive or something(BLACK CHARACTER WITHOUT A GOOD FATHER FIGURE GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEGGGGGGGGGGGG). Anyway after a bunch of SNCA it eventually ends with Coco punching Mymy(to the point there's blood) and Cleo ends up saying it's the other peoples fault and Coco is in the right(we are supposed to sympathize with her?). Ends with Coco crying or something.
Would be good as a retarded fic to laugh at if it wasn't 6 trillion pages long or something
No.108713
>>108708>yuri >it's explained how this stems from abusive parentsWhat did the author mean by this?
No.108714
>>108708mymyabvse therefore gem
No.108715
>>108714mymyabuse wnbag and wnbzc, i will never let anyone hurt Mymy
No.108717
>>108715Evendoe it made for gemmy 'tosses
No.108718
>>108708>83 pagesAy yai yai! Who writes this much drek? The West truly has fallen oder epes.
No.108719
>>108718same nigga who wrote ambitious delusions apparently
No.108720
>>108719Can someone marge me the fuck in
No.108721
>>108720some dude called u/Bluetea345 wrote the fic ambitious delusions and total opposites but privated the first one because he's a selfish little fuck
No.108722
>>108721Is it any good or legible or not shit
No.108723
>>108722haven't read the first but the second is pretty coally
No.108730
>>108728They're mentally ill faggots who can't handle criticism
No.108732
>>108730Thats aryan shemmycuck
No.108736
>>108734I'm writing a fanfic about Ms.Vera and John Madden.
No.108737
man you guys are retarded. ambitious delusions was privated a million years before you faggots started talking about it. a website filled with illiterate third world teenage nigs is not pulling all the strings
No.108746
>>108721I read it in its hekkin entirety and I’m too much of a lazy nigger to explain it but the ending pissed me off because it was an attempt of an open ended ending (which i don’t like but some do) but what made it especially shitty was that it ended extremely abruptly, like a cliff hanger but with no suspense really. I would appreciate it more if it ended off with (coco in this case) making a decision that can be taken into interpretation on what her intentions were but in this case the storyline was just dropped like a bag of rocks. I will say it wasn’t that bad, the yurislop only was obvious on the very last chapter when it was addressed, otherwise the story was mostly about family drama and Cleo threating mymy about snca. I’d call it iron. Most would probably call it rust or coal but i found the drama mildly entertaining.
No.108807
>>108746it’s coal because it’s very clear when the author is intervening, making characters act out of character for the sake of the plot
No.108811
>>108807I’ll give you that for sure saar
No.109624
>>108565put it back up pwease i wanna read it :(
No.109625
>>108728cuz most of the communities filled with troons self projecting their echo chambered isolation
No.109697
>>108708The thing with Maya really pissed me off
I’m pretty biased cuz she’s my favorite character (cuz I also hate myself and am a lonely shithead geg) and the way she acts in this writing sooo bad.
It’s really obvious the author was forcing everything and it’s horrific shitslop yurifag nonsense
No.109698
>>109697We reap the consequences of letting any litteral who to write whatever they want o algo.
No.109700
>>109698>letting any litteral whoholy esl
No.111604
Bvmp