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 No.104616[Last 50 Posts]

I recently dove cock first into fanfictions, most of them are vantablack niggerhell, but these are gemmies that YOU VVILL READ

Death & Reborn: A bone-chilling, spine-tingling, genre-redefining, character-driven ZEMERALD of Maya failing to ACK herself after feeling guilty for BEATING THE CLITTY OUT OF COCO or something: https://archiveofourown.org/works/62666986/chapters/160421989

Reunion: Takes place 10 years after the pilot or something with the family reuniting o algo, and Coco and Mymy get Maya to stop being a CLITTYCELL and go outside: https://archiveofourown.org/works/64015864/chapters/164218912

Hoi Maya: Maya ACKed herself and Coco keeps writing letters to her cause SHE WON'T TAKE HER MEDS!!!!!: https://archiveofourown.org/works/67132486

EVERYTHING ELSE I EITHER HAVEN'T READ OR IS VANTABLACK BRIMSTONE!!!!!

 No.104617

>maya kills herself
>everyone hates maya
>maya kills herself… 2
drop DEAD

 No.104618

>Maya ACKed herself and Coco keeps writing letters to her cause SHE WON'T TAKE HER MEDS!!!!!
this sounds very sad so i will NOT be reading actually

 No.104634

Death and reborn was gemmy but it was rather sad and also the dialogue isn't that good

 No.104636

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>Maya failing to ACK herself after feeling guilty for BEATING THE CLITTY OUT OF COCO or something:
Geg

 No.104637

>>104616
We all know that the best one is One more shot

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 No.104642

>>104641
its written like an english textbook for schools but it was a gem

 No.104659

>>104642
It was an ESL gem and it's such a shame that the author deleted it out of spite

 No.104661

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>>104616
>nuzoi sees vantawhite zemmies for ze first time o algo

 No.104663

>>104637
can I get a link to this shining ZEMMY

 No.104668

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>>104634
>something that was partially made by ai isn't good
do zartycucks know?

 No.104678

>>104668
Zaryans*

 No.104682

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>>104663
https://jumpshare.com/v/99bl0FDueviTcnX0atda
Here you go for your enjoyment (it lacks the last chapter which is now lost mediarino)

 No.104686

>>104682
cookie logger DO NOT CLICK

 No.104696

"Hoi Maya" is some faggot's fetish, I read the whole thing and I regret it.
"Reunion" is boring.
"Death & Reborn" is interesting, I'll read this later.

 No.104698

>>104696
marge what fetish? i was just aboyt to start reading it cause it seemed the most interesting out of all three but im doubted now

 No.104704

>>104698
If you like the idea of girls suffering (because you're a clittycel), read it. S tier gooning material.
If you don't like that, there's not much reason to read it, it's not a hecking cautionary tale or anything.
It's just paragraph after paragraph of suffering with no real substance, and it feels like it was written to arouse sadists.

 No.104705

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>>104696
>fetish
nuzois can't even…

 No.104706

>>104704
We are dark triad here nigga take yo sensitive ass back to r/ongezellig

 No.104707

>>104616
holy shit jackowacko's two roses??

 No.104708

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>>104705
>OH MY GAHD DUDE ISN'T IT SUCH HECKING A24 DEEP INTELLECTUAL EMOTIONAL JUMPSCARE-FREE SLOWBURN SPINE-TINGLING FICTIONKINO TO WATCH A GIRL KILL HERSELF AND THEN WATCH HER ADOPTED SISTERS FUCKING SUFFER FOR NINE DECADES OH MY GAHD DUDE IT'S JUST LIKE GUTS OR SERIAL EXPERIMENTS LAIN EVEN THOUGH THOSE THINGS HAVE NO FUCKING RELATION TO EACHOTHER AT ALL BESIDES BEING LE SAD GAHD I'M SUCH AN EMOTIONALLY STRONG HUMAN BEING DESPITE NEVER EXPERIENCING ANYTHING UPSETTING IN MY ENTIRE LIFE OF DRINKING SOYLENT AND EATING SUGARY CEREALS AND DON'T FORGET THE FUCKING IPA BEERS BRO

 No.104709

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>We are dark triad here nigga take yo sensitive ass back to r/ongezellig

 No.104711

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>>104708
>WORDWORDWORDSWORDSWORDSWORDSWORDS
holy yap nigga nobody is reading allat

 No.104713

>>104711
wordswordswords and being a jew is aryan

 No.104714

File: 1756561878018.png (83.18 KB, 415x707, ClipboardImage.png)

>A fanfic about Maya suffering?
>What a bold and interesting topic haha not like I enjoy seeing girls suffering for no reason haha

 No.104715

>>104714
They probably say this.
<reddit space
Reading Death & Reborn and I'm starting to feel like everybody who likes this Dutch tranime is just a fucking dramaqueen.

 No.104716

>>104715
>I'm starting to feel like everybody who likes this Dutch tranime is just a fucking dramaqueen.
Well even massa's inner circle were having 'cord drama among themselves way before soyteens found the show

 No.104717

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>>104716
Man, what a great way to spend your shit life, being sad all the time, not pathetic at all.
Seriously, what is this? People need to learn to enjoy life every once in a while.

 No.104718

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>>104717
NO, FUCK YOU I HOPE YOU FUCKING DIE FAGGOT!!!!11!!!1!!!!!

 No.104719

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>>104718
Zeg, no arrow thoughbeit.

 No.104720

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>>104719
FUCK DID YOU JUST SAY TO ME FAGGOT?!?!?!? NO FUCKING ARROW!?!?!? HOW ABOUT THE FUCCKING ARROW ILL SHOOT THROUGH YOUR FUCCKING WINDOW YOU FUCCKING FAGGGOT!!!!!111!!!!!!11!!

 No.104721

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 No.104722

>>104721
FUCKCGIGN NIGGEGR ILL FUCKING SNED A FUCKING BOMB IN YOUR MAILBOX FAGGOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 No.104723

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 No.104812

>>104682
was the last chapter that important?

 No.104813

>>104707
marge…

 No.104836

>>104812
It was Mymy and a bunch of classmates playing HOI4 together and they finally brought up the fact that Maya was an unwholesome alcoholic, then it ends

 No.104840

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>>104836
>A foid who plays strategy games
Sorry but those aren't real

 No.104870

>>104616
In general I think attempting/committing suicide is kind of a mischaracterization of Maya and Hoi Maya is excessively depressing. Reunion is actually a heart warming, soul touching, life affirming, eslGOD gem about the sisters’ love (if you can look past all of Mymy’s oc sailor friends). Thank you for the read zaryan.

 No.104872

>>104870
It's said and shown time and time again that Maya is a pussy and even in the worst cases she'd never actually put herself in a dangerous situation

 No.104874

snca

 No.104882

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>>104616
(OP HERE) HOI MAYA IS COAL, I PUT IT HERE CAUSE THE MEDS JOKE

 No.104888

>>104882
>You WILL NOT read hoi Maya because uhmm… Mi heckin' waifu Maya dies of zoiets

 No.104892

>>104888
no it just fucking sucks

 No.104923

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>>104682
i have never been more invested in a piece of literacy in my entire life, first few chapters kinda suck though

 No.104931

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>>104840
I got permabanned from reddit for saying this; that such thing as female HOI4 players were either trannies or niggas pretending to be foids. I wonder who would have been triggered by such statement…

 No.104932

>>104923
Someone ought to continue that piece of kino in the same ESL style

 No.104933

>>104617
fippy bippy

 No.104935

File: 1756587445639.gif (2.47 MB, 915x1200, you.gif)

>>>104617
>fippy bippy

 No.104936

>>104935
keep gooning to and propogating offsite tranny fanfiction, this is why the zarty is dead. everyone is an offsiter. everyone

 No.104937

File: 1756588134620.mp4 (1.47 MB, 500x500, slf selfish little fuck fa….mp4)

>>>104935
>keep gooning to and propogating offsite tranny fanfiction, this is why the zarty is dead. everyone is an offsiter. everyone

 No.104938

everyone is a soulless brown new shartycuck and maya has become the go-to self insert for invalid trannies and retarded chudcels alike for displaying how much they want to kill themselves. there's never been more 'zellig ackjaks on the catalog or index despite the zellig lee's who created them having dying out like all the other oldfags a long time ago. how is this possible? how did things get so brown and retarded? why is everyone so obsessed with suicide and abuse?

 No.104940

File: 1756588812086.mp4 (18.96 MB, 1080x1080, 1744129474738.mp4)

>everyone is a soulless brown new shartycuck and maya has become the go-to self insert for invalid trannies and retarded chudcels alike for displaying how much they want to kill themselves. there's never been more 'zellig ackjaks on the catalog or index despite the zellig lee's who created them having dying out like all the other oldfags a long time ago. how is this possible? how did things get so brown and retarded? why is everyone so obsessed with suicide and abuse?

 No.104942

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>>104938
>everyone is a soulless brown new shartycuck and maya has become the go-to self insert for invalid trannies and retarded chudcels alike for displaying how much they want to kill themselves. there's never been more 'zellig ackjaks on the catalog or index despite the zellig lee's who created them having dying out like all the other oldfags a long time ago. how is this possible? how did things get so brown and retarded? why is everyone so obsessed with suicide and abuse?

 No.104944

>>104942
failquote

 No.104945

>>104938
>Words words words it's le over
Well you see chud, chuds are normally incels and Maya fits that archetype perfectly.
>>104936
And don't start on the off-siter thing, if we really have to be picky even one more shot wasn't made by us, take the oldfag glasses off for one second

 No.104946

>>104938
>why is everyone so obsessed with suicide and abuse?
the first noble truth is that life is suffering o algo

 No.104954

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>>104944
>failquote

 No.104956

>>104954
>xitter filename

 No.104957

>>104956
geg chudquoters are xittergroids

 No.104958

>>104957
meds, i'm a chudquoter and i'm a cute trans girl that doesn't use xitter.

 No.104962

>>104958
Why did the shemmy have to shut down

 No.104991

>>104836
i should write the last chapter like the last episode of breaking bad. Maya just kills everyone in the alcohol gang or something and dies o algo

 No.107913

https://web.archive.org/web/20250917152129/https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hRSUu_kbMDGzUr_Gr_5ayzoLjfLydpRFfgE9RhaGD_U/edit?tab=t.0

ADLAL was gemmy(doe it was made by a troon), they privated it because they're retarded or something but I 'chived it

 No.108219

>>107913
i hated this because 1. literally everything prior to chapter 9 is completely fucking ignored, and 2. Roos has NO FUCKING REASON TO LIKE MAYA. 3. the formating is awful, niggerfag has never heard of the enter key. 4. the pacing is awful, maya just cut herself and her family saw it? welp its never addressed and her family NEVER BOTHERS TO FUCKING MENTION IT AGAIN

 No.108220

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>>107913
what really pisses me off, is that the epilogue is really good. it couldve just been its own short story

 No.108255

>>108219
yeah that's all a trvke, I like it mainly because it didn't take 2 weeks for every chapter to release and because it actually had some good length

 No.108256

>>108219
and the Roos part is so funny, it's obvious the author is self inserting as Maya and Roos is a way of fantasizing of being saved by a woman. He doesn't want to put effort into fixing himself so he fantasizes about being saved by some woman for no reason

 No.108257

>>108256
that's notably similar to fiction made by women where the female protagonist is sweeped off their feet by or fought over by big beautiful muscular men.

 No.108260

>>108257
yep, it's just immaturity in a text form

 No.108261

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also im really tired of people pretending that 10 dutch days is a bone-chilling, spine-tingling, genre-redefining, character-driven ZEMERALD because it FUCKING SUCKS

the dialogue is annoying, the author keeps mentioning things that dont fucking matter, and they wont shut up about THE HECKIN RPG THAT MAYA MADE

cool concept doe

 No.108263

>>108261
Marge what’s 10 Dutch Days

 No.108264

>>108263
some plebbit fanfic on AO3 that take place in the future. coco is essentially maya now, and maya is somewhat like Coco now, but she still has anxiety. id maybe recommend reading it if your bored, but dont bother otherwise

 No.108285

>>108261
10DD is an example of ideaslop, it's all concept, no actually good writing just the "omg Coco is Maya and Maya is Coco" idea

 No.108286

>>108285
>10DD
Marge explain now

 No.108287

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>>107913
ive been reading this and its fine or something and also one of the lines is literally
>lesbians are awesome they are so wonderful its normal for a person to be a lesbian
>>108256
tsmt and maya is a SLF

 No.108288

>>108286
10 dutch days

 No.108289

>>108287
yeah the Roos part is easily the most coally and self insert thing imaginable

 No.108306

File: 1758653676894.mp4 (13.8 MB, 850x480, _NOOOINEEDMOREZELLIGCONTEN….mp4)

can someone link me the full story of "Ambitious Delusions". its on plebbit so you can find the links there, but seasons 2-4 need access to read because idk the author is retarded or something

 No.108307

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>>108289
it couldve been so gemmy doe. if they had gotten into a circumstance where they had to talk to eachother (ie forced to work together on a project) then that could start their friendship then relationship. but APPARENTLY THATS TOO HARD

 No.108310

>>108307
it could have, but the author chose to fill it with retarded dialogue and SNCA that just dragged the story pointlessly

 No.108312

>>108307
Most of the dialogue is clunky and the Roos thing does feel forced but I can suspend my disbelief and say it is possible for Roos to have a crush on Maya. But the ending with the whole “it’s okay Maya you don’t have to make anymore actual progress on your struggles which has been the entire focus so far, I’ll just carry around a bag to baby you from now on” really fucking sucks and defeats the whole point of the story. Goes from iron to coal with the last chapter.

 No.108313

>>108312
that part genuinely pissed me off, the author actually want to be babied and treated like a child(not surprising for a troon), so they self insert as Maya

 No.108346

>>108306
think what happened is the author decided to private them like a SLF
Seasons 2 and 4 are seemingly lost but here's season 3(doe it's a pain to actually read because archive is being retarded, just screenshot it or something):https://web.archive.org/web/20250607142254/https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ReWi4q0fpLO92o9B_aZrj1Bg8rG8PFNc/edit?tab=t.0

 No.108349

>>108346
that archive is dead

 No.108355

>>108346
opens with mymy getting shot. fucking gemmy

 No.108360

>>108346
this is actually so fucking gemmy

 No.108361

>>108355
Kys Mymyabuser, /mymycare/ won

 No.108362

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>>108361
SNCA award

 No.108365

>>108349
click the see other pages archived under this link or something

 No.108370

File: 1758683664780.png (1.15 MB, 3024x4032, 1738534109860.png)

Remember the comic Cam made at the beginning of 2024? I would have liked him to continue it.

 No.108371

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 No.108373

>>108371
Probably some weird nigga inserting themselves into relationships with the characters

 No.108375

>>108371
>>108373
>newfags dont remember cam
JSID

 No.108378

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>>108371
https://camongezellig.newgrounds.com/art
>>108373
No Cam is alright, it’s a little self insert-y but Mats was mainly just supposed to be a genderbent Maya.

 No.108386

>>108378
Is fun to read

 No.108387

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>>108378
i hunger for more zellig comics

 No.108392

>>108387
screenshotting gifs will always be a gem

 No.108409

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>>108378
Mats is a bit of a self insert but he actually works because he fits into the story (4 letter name + plot relevance) and isn't the main focus like almost every other faggot oc in zellig fics

 No.108413

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>foenkie's self insert oc is le good actually

 No.108434

>>108409
I also think he could be a good friendship for Maya but I don't know if they could have a relationship.

 No.108441

>>108437
kill yourself yurifag fanficpedo

 No.108443

>>108442
NOBODY is reading a full novel’s length worth of incestyurigarbage nigga

 No.108444

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>>108442
its a gay incest fanfic about two sixteen year olds. i dont need to read it to know it's shit

 No.108445

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 No.108447

>>108445
It was actually pretty brave to post that knowing how everybody would react to yuripedoincest geg. I skimmed a few chapters and it is actually well written and seems more of an emotional examination than anything, but the sisters kiss so IT IS FUCKING COAL

 No.108448

>>108447
why is it 52 chapters. what do they do

 No.108449

>>108448
It seemed like a lot of shit about Coco’s band. Zoey’s mom has terminal aids or something and Zoey is glad she’s dying which sets off Coco’s PTSD. Coco cuts herself, she and Maya get close because Coco eases her anxiety and she eases Coco’s existential angst. But I only read half of like 4 chapters so take it with a grain of salt.

 No.108455

>>108449
i read the whole thing, and there was never a moment in it where i felt uncomfortable

 No.108456

>>108447
yeah its definitely more about the emotions than the love

 No.108460

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>>108455
I think Maya and Coco are both pretty broken and them learning to lean on each other to help them deal with their problems is nice, even contact like cuddling could be good sometimes, but having siblings kissing while laying in bed together and quasi-dating is just too far.
<Even in cases of adoption, Fritzl.

 No.108472

>>108460
i do agree, but it never made me feel weirded out or grossed out, which i think is a massive accomplishment considering what it is

 No.108473

>>108472
>im not grossed out by incest therefore this yuri incestnegro coal is actually heckin good!
i think youre just a fucking freak

 No.108476

YuriWNBAG

 No.108477

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>>108473
>ignores my point
>proclaims i mean another thing
>attacks that point
>proclaims victory
literal textbook example of a strawman

 No.108479

>>108477
>muh heckin strawman
go back to plebbit you fucking faggot
my point still stands, you complimented the incest fanfic while saying that the incest didnt gross you out at all. therefore i think youre an incest-loving retarded freak

 No.108480

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>>108479
>still ignores my point
holy seethe

 No.108482

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File: 1758739838544-1.png (5.59 KB, 300x174, bait.png)

>>108479
>>108473
fell for the most obvious bait award

 No.108486

>>108482
im sure the guy that has been talking about how much he loves this incest fanfic for the past 4 hours is purely baiting, and not doing it because he actually thinks the story is good or anything

 No.108487

>>108480
please tell me your point so i can read it and decide that it doesnt change anything and youre still a gross incestfag

 No.108492

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>>108487
>sees someone says its bait
>still falls for the bait
theres no helping you

 No.108493

>>108487
I think his point is that incest is always gross, but this story handles it in a way that is much less gross than usual. Or something.

 No.108494

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>>108493
if he wasnt baiting thats probably what he meant. but i think hes baiting regardless

 No.108495

>>108493
which means that his point is still shit. good to know

 No.108496

>>108494
Idk it didn’t seem like bait to me. I mean it is well written and it does deal with Coco’s PTSD in an interesting way. It’s a shame these authors can’t just reign it in a little bit.

 No.108497

>>108495
if you were expecting to be stabbed in the heart, only to see that you've been poked by a toothpick, you'd say "oh, that hurt but it wasn't as bad as i thought itd be"

 No.108498

>>108492
>>108494
>the fanfic faggot used these exact 2 images yesterday
>he also stopped replying to me as soon as you appeared
this is a very poorly done backpedal

 No.108499

>>108496
it be a lot better if they didn't kiss eachother, the hugging is fine because thats what family does

 No.108500

>inb4 this thread has run its course

 No.108503

>>108499
Well cuddling may be a little beyond what family normally does but in their case I think it can make sense.

 No.108504

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>>108498
yes because as we all know, nobody downloads images they find funny here

 No.108506

>>108503
i think it makes sense because Maya hasn't really had anyone, so her being clingy is accurate

 No.108507

>>108504
you both also type the exact same way and you both occasionally forget to use arrows when youre using a soi to make fun of somebody. you are horribly autistic and im not surprised youre trying to create an incest circlejerk hellhole

 No.108508

>>108506
Yeah and Coco is terrified of losing anybody again so holding can make her feel safe. But cuddling like that isn’t just normal family physical contact.

 No.108509

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>>108507
>you both also type the exact same way and you both occasionally forget to use arrows when youre using a soi to make fun of somebody. you are horribly autistic and im not surprised youre trying to create an incest circlejerk hellhole

holy heckin seethe

 No.108524

the link to Hoi Maya is dead, anyone have a 'chive?

 No.108526

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>>108524
why is this community filled with SLF who keep deleting their works

 No.108527

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>>108524
summary: Coco essentially blames herself for Maya's ACKing. shes depresso espresso until maya's 19th birthday, where she gets shivers and believes that it was maya, and then she goes on the live a happy life because maya wants her to.

the last lines were something along the lines of "Maya and Coco are now in an eternal embrace, in a plane of existence beyond our understanding, their love dancing across the stars"

it was actually a really touching and sad story, which is why im so mad its been deleted

 No.108528

>>108527
I know the story I just want it for future rereading

 No.108530


 No.108532

>>108527
it's a good thing it got deleted albeit

 No.108536

>>108526
predditors are retarded

 No.108538

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 No.108540

>>108532
Trvke, sorry to whoever liked it but it was overwritten depressing coal about suicide (despite that being shown as something Maya would not do) and then about her sisters suffering for the rest of their lives. There was nothing redeeming about Hoi Maya and nothing of value has been lost.

 No.108543

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>>108540
>it makes me HECKIN SAD so its HECKIN BAD
fucking retard

 No.108544

my main problem was that it was way too dramatic, Coco does not obsess over Maya that much

 No.108545

>>108543
Yeah if you don’t want to read page after page of a girl’s anguish at losing family FOR THE SECOND TIME, you just don’t have an appreciation for real A24 kino like I do. Never mind that to even get to this point they had to hamfistedly put in a suicide that makes no sense with no explanation. That doesn’t matter, all that matters is the suffering!

 No.108547

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>>108545
no arrow therefore you believe that

 No.108548

>>108526
I've heard some of them stalk zarty, maybe they got rid of it because they don't want us to enjoy it(prime troon behavior)

 No.108549

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>>108548
Explains a lot geg, instead of wanting to improve their story they delete it because le hecking internet racists called it shit

 No.108550

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 No.108551

>>108547
Whatever sadistfag. Enjoy never reading your lost mediarino brimstone again, while I have already ‘chived my hope filled gems of perseverance and triumph GEG

 No.108553

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>>108551
>Whatever sadistfag. Enjoy never reading your lost mediarino brimstone again, while I have already ‘chived my hope filled gems of perseverance and triumph GEG

 No.108565

i didn't take it down because you didn't like it you idiots, i took it down because *i* didn't like it

 No.108566

>>108565
worst bait ever

 No.108569

>>108565
best worm ever

 No.108573

>>108569
who are you?

 No.108574

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 No.108575

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 No.108576

>>108575
i mean you can keep jerking off to the reality you made up in your own head i guess

 No.108577

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>>108565
>Im going to delete zellig media just because I dont like, now no one gets to enjoy it

You're a selfish little fuck and part of the reason zellig is dying, the least you plebbit cucks and do is leave it up so actual competent writers can learn from it

 No.108579

>>108577
Being a SLF is aryan though

 No.108581

>>108577
why do you care so much about the existence of some shitty fanfiction of a mildly amusing webtoon? go read actual literature or something

 No.108595

>>108581
>t. Massad

 No.108598

>>108574
geg
>>108577
it's a good thing it got deleted albeit

 No.108666

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>>108577
VANTARYAN TRVTH NVKE

 No.108669

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 No.108708

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RKIaZEB_HSyJHl2_IyQl8c6EZ7y89sPu/edit GGGGGGEEEEGGGG discovered some gigacoal.
Basically it's a yurislop fic where Cleo likes Coco and wants to get with her so she threatens Mymy and tells her not to spend time with Coco. Later on it's revealed that Cleo's behavior is because her dad is abusive or something(BLACK CHARACTER WITHOUT A GOOD FATHER FIGURE GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEGGGGGGGGGGGG). Anyway after a bunch of SNCA it eventually ends with Coco punching Mymy(to the point there's blood) and Cleo ends up saying it's the other peoples fault and Coco is in the right(we are supposed to sympathize with her?). Ends with Coco crying or something.
Would be good as a retarded fic to laugh at if it wasn't 6 trillion pages long or something

 No.108713

>>108708
>yuri
>it's explained how this stems from abusive parents
What did the author mean by this?

 No.108714

>>108708
mymyabvse therefore gem

 No.108715

>>108714
mymyabuse wnbag and wnbzc, i will never let anyone hurt Mymy

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 No.108717

>>108715
Evendoe it made for gemmy 'tosses

 No.108718

>>108708
>83 pages
Ay yai yai! Who writes this much drek? The West truly has fallen oder epes.

 No.108719

>>108718
same nigga who wrote ambitious delusions apparently

 No.108720

>>108719
Can someone marge me the fuck in

 No.108721

>>108720
some dude called u/Bluetea345 wrote the fic ambitious delusions and total opposites but privated the first one because he's a selfish little fuck

 No.108722

>>108721
Is it any good or legible or not shit

 No.108723

>>108722
haven't read the first but the second is pretty coally

 No.108724

>>108723
Typical

 No.108728

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>>108721
WHY IS EVERY ZELLIG WRITER A SLF WHO PRIVATES THEIR WORK CUZ SOME CHUDDIES MADE FUN OF IT

 No.108730

>>108728
They're mentally ill faggots who can't handle criticism

 No.108732

>>108730
Thats aryan shemmycuck

 No.108733

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>>108732
>Thats aryan shemmycuck

 No.108734

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>>108730
IM WRITING A FANFIC ABOUT COCO BEATING UP MAYA'S SHITSKIN BULLY or whatever
I WANT CRITICISM CAUSE I NEED IT TO WRITE GEMMIES IN THE FUTURE, REGARDLESS OF IF IM WRITING COAL NOW

GOT TO HAVE COAL BEFORE GEMS

 No.108736

>>108734
I'm writing a fanfic about Ms.Vera and John Madden.

 No.108737

man you guys are retarded. ambitious delusions was privated a million years before you faggots started talking about it. a website filled with illiterate third world teenage nigs is not pulling all the strings

 No.108738

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>>108737
this you?

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 No.108740

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>yeah

 No.108741

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 No.108742

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>flood detected; post discarded

 No.108743

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>>108708
its so clear that this plebbitor just went with the first draft and didn't bother to improve upon it because… BECAUSE

 No.108746

>>108721
I read it in its hekkin entirety and I’m too much of a lazy nigger to explain it but the ending pissed me off because it was an attempt of an open ended ending (which i don’t like but some do) but what made it especially shitty was that it ended extremely abruptly, like a cliff hanger but with no suspense really. I would appreciate it more if it ended off with (coco in this case) making a decision that can be taken into interpretation on what her intentions were but in this case the storyline was just dropped like a bag of rocks. I will say it wasn’t that bad, the yurislop only was obvious on the very last chapter when it was addressed, otherwise the story was mostly about family drama and Cleo threating mymy about snca. I’d call it iron. Most would probably call it rust or coal but i found the drama mildly entertaining.

 No.108764

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>>108708
>the color chosen for cleos dad is dark brown

 No.108807

>>108746
it’s coal because it’s very clear when the author is intervening, making characters act out of character for the sake of the plot

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>>108807
I’ll give you that for sure saar

 No.109624

>>108565
put it back up pwease i wanna read it :(

 No.109625

>>108728

cuz most of the communities filled with troons self projecting their echo chambered isolation

 No.109674

>>109624
do this

 No.109697

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>>108708
The thing with Maya really pissed me off

I’m pretty biased cuz she’s my favorite character (cuz I also hate myself and am a lonely shithead geg) and the way she acts in this writing sooo bad.

It’s really obvious the author was forcing everything and it’s horrific shitslop yurifag nonsense

 No.109698

>>109697
We reap the consequences of letting any litteral who to write whatever they want o algo.

 No.109700

>>109698
>letting any litteral who
holy esl

 No.109702

>>109700
No… I'm right.

 No.109704

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 No.110517

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bump because niggers keep bumping threads from 2 years ago and burying our gemmies



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