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I recently dove cock first into fanfictions, most of them are vantablack niggerhell, but these are gemmies that YOU VVILL READ

Death & Reborn: A bone-chilling, spine-tingling, genre-redefining, character-driven ZEMERALD of Maya failing to ACK herself after feeling guilty for BEATING THE CLITTY OUT OF COCO or something: https://archiveofourown.org/works/62666986/chapters/160421989

Reunion: Takes place 10 years after the pilot or something with the family reuniting o algo, and Coco and Mymy get Maya to stop being a CLITTYCELL and go outside: https://archiveofourown.org/works/64015864/chapters/164218912

Hoi Maya: Maya ACKed herself and Coco keeps writing letters to her cause SHE WON'T TAKE HER MEDS!!!!!: https://archiveofourown.org/works/67132486

EVERYTHING ELSE I EITHER HAVEN'T READ OR IS VANTABLACK BRIMSTONE!!!!!
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 No.108714

>>108708
mymyabvse therefore gem

 No.108715

>>108714
mymyabuse wnbag and wnbzc, i will never let anyone hurt Mymy

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 No.108717

>>108715
Evendoe it made for gemmy 'tosses

 No.108718

>>108708
>83 pages
Ay yai yai! Who writes this much drek? The West truly has fallen oder epes.

 No.108719

>>108718
same nigga who wrote ambitious delusions apparently

 No.108720

>>108719
Can someone marge me the fuck in

 No.108721

>>108720
some dude called u/Bluetea345 wrote the fic ambitious delusions and total opposites but privated the first one because he's a selfish little fuck

 No.108722

>>108721
Is it any good or legible or not shit

 No.108723

>>108722
haven't read the first but the second is pretty coally

 No.108724

>>108723
Typical

 No.108728

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>>108721
WHY IS EVERY ZELLIG WRITER A SLF WHO PRIVATES THEIR WORK CUZ SOME CHUDDIES MADE FUN OF IT

 No.108730

>>108728
They're mentally ill faggots who can't handle criticism

 No.108732

>>108730
Thats aryan shemmycuck

 No.108733

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>>108732
>Thats aryan shemmycuck

 No.108734

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>>108730
IM WRITING A FANFIC ABOUT COCO BEATING UP MAYA'S SHITSKIN BULLY or whatever
I WANT CRITICISM CAUSE I NEED IT TO WRITE GEMMIES IN THE FUTURE, REGARDLESS OF IF IM WRITING COAL NOW

GOT TO HAVE COAL BEFORE GEMS

 No.108736

>>108734
I'm writing a fanfic about Ms.Vera and John Madden.

 No.108737

man you guys are retarded. ambitious delusions was privated a million years before you faggots started talking about it. a website filled with illiterate third world teenage nigs is not pulling all the strings

 No.108738

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>>108737
this you?

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 No.108740

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>yeah

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 No.108742

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>flood detected; post discarded

 No.108743

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>>108708
its so clear that this plebbitor just went with the first draft and didn't bother to improve upon it because… BECAUSE

 No.108746

>>108721
I read it in its hekkin entirety and I’m too much of a lazy nigger to explain it but the ending pissed me off because it was an attempt of an open ended ending (which i don’t like but some do) but what made it especially shitty was that it ended extremely abruptly, like a cliff hanger but with no suspense really. I would appreciate it more if it ended off with (coco in this case) making a decision that can be taken into interpretation on what her intentions were but in this case the storyline was just dropped like a bag of rocks. I will say it wasn’t that bad, the yurislop only was obvious on the very last chapter when it was addressed, otherwise the story was mostly about family drama and Cleo threating mymy about snca. I’d call it iron. Most would probably call it rust or coal but i found the drama mildly entertaining.

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>>108708
>the color chosen for cleos dad is dark brown

 No.108807

>>108746
it’s coal because it’s very clear when the author is intervening, making characters act out of character for the sake of the plot

 No.108811

>>108807
I’ll give you that for sure saar

 No.109624

>>108565
put it back up pwease i wanna read it :(

 No.109625

>>108728

cuz most of the communities filled with troons self projecting their echo chambered isolation

 No.109674

>>109624
do this

 No.109697

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>>108708
The thing with Maya really pissed me off

I’m pretty biased cuz she’s my favorite character (cuz I also hate myself and am a lonely shithead geg) and the way she acts in this writing sooo bad.

It’s really obvious the author was forcing everything and it’s horrific shitslop yurifag nonsense

 No.109698

>>109697
We reap the consequences of letting any litteral who to write whatever they want o algo.

 No.109700

>>109698
>letting any litteral who
holy esl

 No.109702

>>109700
No… I'm right.

 No.109704

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 No.110517

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bump because niggers keep bumping threads from 2 years ago and burying our gemmies

 No.111604

Bvmp

 No.115312

https://archiveofourown.org/works/66103363/chapters/170354623

looked at ao3 a bit, past all the goonslop coal and the fics everyone knows about I found this one, it's not the most interesting and the last chapter is schizoslop but I haven't seen many fics with a paranormal aspect which is unique I guess

 No.115323

>>115312
I read it already and it fucking sucks
The only decent one isDAR and even that shit was pretty piss poorly written
I hope writerfag makes a gem or something

 No.115324

>>104714
>nobody is aloud to suffer! (Because it’s not like suffering makes a story interesting)

 No.115325

>>115324
*allowed
God im retarded

 No.115344

>>115312
Shitty ass fic that somehow manages to fuck up the characterisation of every single character, still better than yuricoal doebiet

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 No.115349

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>>115344
trvke
also maya being a "belgian" is so overused that it's genuinely not funny anymore, it's just annoyed as shit

 No.115353

>>115312
i kinda liked the fic "the election" https://archiveofourown.org/works/66336976/chapters/171043669
its somewhat bad, but its pretty entertaining and doesnt veer too far off of who the characters were (though some are a bit exagerrated)

 No.115356

>>115349
what if Maya is Dutch, she was born in the Netherlands, and we should not trust the foreigner Coco, also Maya corrects Coco that she not from Belgium, she's from Brabant,

 No.115374

>>115356
>completely missed the fucking point award
The “joke” is that people say shes Belgian when shes not because Coco is a fucking retard who tries to fix everyone problems instead of just listening

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