Ongezellig

>foenkie's self insert oc is le good actually

>>108409
I also think he could be a good friendship for Maya but I don't know if they could have a relationship.

>>108437
kill yourself yurifag fanficpedo

>>108442
NOBODY is reading a full novel’s length worth of incestyurigarbage nigga

>>108442
its a gay incest fanfic about two sixteen year olds. i dont need to read it to know it's shit

>>108441
>>108443
>>108444

>>108445
It was actually pretty brave to post that knowing how everybody would react to yuripedoincest geg. I skimmed a few chapters and it is actually well written and seems more of an emotional examination than anything, but the sisters kiss so IT IS FUCKING COAL

>>108447
why is it 52 chapters. what do they do

>>108448
It seemed like a lot of shit about Coco’s band. Zoey’s mom has terminal aids or something and Zoey is glad she’s dying which sets off Coco’s PTSD. Coco cuts herself, she and Maya get close because Coco eases her anxiety and she eases Coco’s existential angst. But I only read half of like 4 chapters so take it with a grain of salt.

>>108449
i read the whole thing, and there was never a moment in it where i felt uncomfortable

>>108447
yeah its definitely more about the emotions than the love

>>108455
I think Maya and Coco are both pretty broken and them learning to lean on each other to help them deal with their problems is nice, even contact like cuddling could be good sometimes, but having siblings kissing while laying in bed together and quasi-dating is just too far.
<Even in cases of adoption, Fritzl.

>>108460
i do agree, but it never made me feel weirded out or grossed out, which i think is a massive accomplishment considering what it is

>>108472
>im not grossed out by incest therefore this yuri incestnegro coal is actually heckin good!
i think youre just a fucking freak

YuriWNBAG

>>108473
>ignores my point
>proclaims i mean another thing
>attacks that point
>proclaims victory
literal textbook example of a strawman

>>108477
>muh heckin strawman
go back to plebbit you fucking faggot
my point still stands, you complimented the incest fanfic while saying that the incest didnt gross you out at all. therefore i think youre an incest-loving retarded freak

>>108479
>still ignores my point
holy seethe

>>108479
>>108473
fell for the most obvious bait award

>>108482
im sure the guy that has been talking about how much he loves this incest fanfic for the past 4 hours is purely baiting, and not doing it because he actually thinks the story is good or anything

>>108480
please tell me your point so i can read it and decide that it doesnt change anything and youre still a gross incestfag

>>108487
>sees someone says its bait
>still falls for the bait
theres no helping you

>>108487
I think his point is that incest is always gross, but this story handles it in a way that is much less gross than usual. Or something.

>>108493
if he wasnt baiting thats probably what he meant. but i think hes baiting regardless

>>108493
which means that his point is still shit. good to know

>>108494
Idk it didn’t seem like bait to me. I mean it is well written and it does deal with Coco’s PTSD in an interesting way. It’s a shame these authors can’t just reign it in a little bit.

>>108495
if you were expecting to be stabbed in the heart, only to see that you've been poked by a toothpick, you'd say "oh, that hurt but it wasn't as bad as i thought itd be"

>>108492
>>108494
>the fanfic faggot used these exact 2 images yesterday
>he also stopped replying to me as soon as you appeared
this is a very poorly done backpedal

>>108496
it be a lot better if they didn't kiss eachother, the hugging is fine because thats what family does

>inb4 this thread has run its course

>>108499
Well cuddling may be a little beyond what family normally does but in their case I think it can make sense.

>>108498
yes because as we all know, nobody downloads images they find funny here

>>108503
i think it makes sense because Maya hasn't really had anyone, so her being clingy is accurate

>>108504
you both also type the exact same way and you both occasionally forget to use arrows when youre using a soi to make fun of somebody. you are horribly autistic and im not surprised youre trying to create an incest circlejerk hellhole

>>108506
Yeah and Coco is terrified of losing anybody again so holding can make her feel safe. But cuddling like that isn’t just normal family physical contact.

>>108507
>you both also type the exact same way and you both occasionally forget to use arrows when youre using a soi to make fun of somebody. you are horribly autistic and im not surprised youre trying to create an incest circlejerk hellhole

holy heckin seethe

the link to Hoi Maya is dead, anyone have a 'chive?

>>108524
why is this community filled with SLF who keep deleting their works

>>108524
summary: Coco essentially blames herself for Maya's ACKing. shes depresso espresso until maya's 19th birthday, where she gets shivers and believes that it was maya, and then she goes on the live a happy life because maya wants her to.

the last lines were something along the lines of "Maya and Coco are now in an eternal embrace, in a plane of existence beyond our understanding, their love dancing across the stars"

it was actually a really touching and sad story, which is why im so mad its been deleted

>>108527
I know the story I just want it for future rereading

>>108528
oh ok

>>108527
it's a good thing it got deleted albeit

>>108526
predditors are retarded

>>108532

>>108532
Trvke, sorry to whoever liked it but it was overwritten depressing coal about suicide (despite that being shown as something Maya would not do) and then about her sisters suffering for the rest of their lives. There was nothing redeeming about Hoi Maya and nothing of value has been lost.

>>108540
>it makes me HECKIN SAD so its HECKIN BAD
fucking retard

my main problem was that it was way too dramatic, Coco does not obsess over Maya that much

>>108543
Yeah if you don’t want to read page after page of a girl’s anguish at losing family FOR THE SECOND TIME, you just don’t have an appreciation for real A24 kino like I do. Never mind that to even get to this point they had to hamfistedly put in a suicide that makes no sense with no explanation. That doesn’t matter, all that matters is the suffering!

>>108545
no arrow therefore you believe that

>>108526
I've heard some of them stalk zarty, maybe they got rid of it because they don't want us to enjoy it(prime troon behavior)

>>108548
Explains a lot geg, instead of wanting to improve their story they delete it because le hecking internet racists called it shit

>>108549

>>108547
Whatever sadistfag. Enjoy never reading your lost mediarino brimstone again, while I have already ‘chived my hope filled gems of perseverance and triumph GEG

>>108551
>Whatever sadistfag. Enjoy never reading your lost mediarino brimstone again, while I have already ‘chived my hope filled gems of perseverance and triumph GEG

i didn't take it down because you didn't like it you idiots, i took it down because i didn't like it

>>108565
worst bait ever

>>108565
best worm ever

>>108569
who are you?

>>108573

>>108565

>>108575
i mean you can keep jerking off to the reality you made up in your own head i guess

>>108565
>Im going to delete zellig media just because I dont like, now no one gets to enjoy it

You're a selfish little fuck and part of the reason zellig is dying, the least you plebbit cucks and do is leave it up so actual competent writers can learn from it

>>108577
Being a SLF is aryan though

>>108577
why do you care so much about the existence of some shitty fanfiction of a mildly amusing webtoon? go read actual literature or something

>>108581
>t. Massad

>>108574
geg
>>108577
it's a good thing it got deleted albeit

>>108577
VANTARYAN TRVTH NVKE

>>108577

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RKIaZEB_HSyJHl2_IyQl8c6EZ7y89sPu/edit GGGGGGEEEEGGGG discovered some gigacoal.
Basically it's a yurislop fic where Cleo likes Coco and wants to get with her so she threatens Mymy and tells her not to spend time with Coco. Later on it's revealed that Cleo's behavior is because her dad is abusive or something(BLACK CHARACTER WITHOUT A GOOD FATHER FIGURE GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEGGGGGGGGGGGG). Anyway after a bunch of SNCA it eventually ends with Coco punching Mymy(to the point there's blood) and Cleo ends up saying it's the other peoples fault and Coco is in the right(we are supposed to sympathize with her?). Ends with Coco crying or something.
Would be good as a retarded fic to laugh at if it wasn't 6 trillion pages long or something

>>108708
>yuri
>it's explained how this stems from abusive parents
What did the author mean by this?

>>108708
mymyabvse therefore gem

>>108714
mymyabuse wnbag and wnbzc, i will never let anyone hurt Mymy

>>108715
trve

>>108715
Evendoe it made for gemmy 'tosses

>>108708
>83 pages
Ay yai yai! Who writes this much drek? The West truly has fallen oder epes.

>>108718
same nigga who wrote ambitious delusions apparently

>>108719
Can someone marge me the fuck in

>>108720
some dude called u/Bluetea345 wrote the fic ambitious delusions and total opposites but privated the first one because he's a selfish little fuck

>>108721
Is it any good or legible or not shit

>>108722
haven't read the first but the second is pretty coally

>>108723
Typical

>>108721
WHY IS EVERY ZELLIG WRITER A SLF WHO PRIVATES THEIR WORK CUZ SOME CHUDDIES MADE FUN OF IT

>>108728
They're mentally ill faggots who can't handle criticism

>>108730
Thats aryan shemmycuck

>>108732
>Thats aryan shemmycuck

>>108730
IM WRITING A FANFIC ABOUT COCO BEATING UP MAYA'S SHITSKIN BULLY or whatever
I WANT CRITICISM CAUSE I NEED IT TO WRITE GEMMIES IN THE FUTURE, REGARDLESS OF IF IM WRITING COAL NOW

GOT TO HAVE COAL BEFORE GEMS

>>108734
I'm writing a fanfic about Ms.Vera and John Madden.

man you guys are retarded. ambitious delusions was privated a million years before you faggots started talking about it. a website filled with illiterate third world teenage nigs is not pulling all the strings

>>108737
this you?

>>108738
yeah

>yeah

>>108739
>yeah

>flood detected; post discarded

>>108708
its so clear that this plebbitor just went with the first draft and didn't bother to improve upon it because... BECAUSE

>>108721
I read it in its hekkin entirety and I’m too much of a lazy nigger to explain it but the ending pissed me off because it was an attempt of an open ended ending (which i don’t like but some do) but what made it especially shitty was that it ended extremely abruptly, like a cliff hanger but with no suspense really. I would appreciate it more if it ended off with (coco in this case) making a decision that can be taken into interpretation on what her intentions were but in this case the storyline was just dropped like a bag of rocks. I will say it wasn’t that bad, the yurislop only was obvious on the very last chapter when it was addressed, otherwise the story was mostly about family drama and Cleo threating mymy about snca. I’d call it iron. Most would probably call it rust or coal but i found the drama mildly entertaining.

>>108708
>the color chosen for cleos dad is dark brown

>>108746
it’s coal because it’s very clear when the author is intervening, making characters act out of character for the sake of the plot

>>108807
I’ll give you that for sure saar

>>108565
put it back up pwease i wanna read it :(

>>108728

cuz most of the communities filled with troons self projecting their echo chambered isolation