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I recently dove cock first into fanfictions, most of them are vantablack niggerhell, but these are gemmies that YOU VVILL READ
Death & Reborn: A bone-chilling, spine-tingling, genre-redefining, character-driven ZEMERALD of Maya failing to ACK herself after feeling guilty for BEATING THE CLITTY OUT OF COCO or something: https://archiveofourown.org/works/62666986/chapters/160421989
Reunion: Takes place 10 years after the pilot or something with the family reuniting o algo, and Coco and Mymy get Maya to stop being a CLITTYCELL and go outside: https://archiveofourown.org/works/64015864/chapters/164218912
Hoi Maya: Maya ACKed herself and Coco keeps writing letters to her cause SHE WON'T TAKE HER MEDS!!!!!: https://archiveofourown.org/works/67132486
EVERYTHING ELSE I EITHER HAVEN'T READ OR IS VANTABLACK BRIMSTONE!!!!!
>everyone hates maya
>maya kills herself... 2
drop DEAD
this sounds very sad so i will NOT be reading actually
Geg
its written like an english textbook for schools but it was a gem
It was an ESL gem and it's such a shame that the author deleted it out of spite
https://jumpshare.com/v/99bl0FDueviTcnX0atda
Here you go for your enjoyment (it lacks the last chapter which is now lost mediarino)
"Reunion" is boring.
"Death & Reborn" is interesting, I'll read this later.
marge what fetish? i was just aboyt to start reading it cause it seemed the most interesting out of all three but im doubted now
If you like the idea of girls suffering (because you're a clittycel), read it. S tier gooning material.
If you don't like that, there's not much reason to read it, it's not a hecking cautionary tale or anything.
It's just paragraph after paragraph of suffering with no real substance, and it feels like it was written to arouse sadists.
We are dark triad here nigga take yo sensitive ass back to r/ongezellig
>OH MY GAHD DUDE ISN'T IT SUCH HECKING A24 DEEP INTELLECTUAL EMOTIONAL JUMPSCARE-FREE SLOWBURN SPINE-TINGLING FICTIONKINO TO WATCH A GIRL KILL HERSELF AND THEN WATCH HER ADOPTED SISTERS FUCKING SUFFER FOR NINE DECADES OH MY GAHD DUDE IT'S JUST LIKE GUTS OR SERIAL EXPERIMENTS LAIN EVEN THOUGH THOSE THINGS HAVE NO FUCKING RELATION TO EACHOTHER AT ALL BESIDES BEING LE SAD GAHD I'M SUCH AN EMOTIONALLY STRONG HUMAN BEING DESPITE NEVER EXPERIENCING ANYTHING UPSETTING IN MY ENTIRE LIFE OF DRINKING SOYLENT AND EATING SUGARY CEREALS AND DON'T FORGET THE FUCKING IPA BEERS BRO
>What a bold and interesting topic haha not like I enjoy seeing girls suffering for no reason haha
They probably say this.
<reddit space
Reading Death & Reborn and I'm starting to feel like everybody who likes this Dutch tranime is just a fucking dramaqueen.
>I'm starting to feel like everybody who likes this Dutch tranime is just a fucking dramaqueen.
Well even massa's inner circle were having 'cord drama among themselves way before soyteens found the show
Man, what a great way to spend your shit life, being sad all the time, not pathetic at all.
Seriously, what is this? People need to learn to enjoy life every once in a while.
Zeg, no arrow thoughbeit.
FUCK DID YOU JUST SAY TO ME FAGGOT?!?!?!? NO FUCKING ARROW!?!?!? HOW ABOUT THE FUCCKING ARROW ILL SHOOT THROUGH YOUR FUCCKING WINDOW YOU FUCCKING FAGGGOT!!!!!111!!!!!!11!!
It was Mymy and a bunch of classmates playing HOI4 together and they finally brought up the fact that Maya was an unwholesome alcoholic, then it ends
In general I think attempting/committing suicide is kind of a mischaracterization of Maya and Hoi Maya is excessively depressing. Reunion is actually a heart warming, soul touching, life affirming, eslGOD gem about the sisters’ love (if you can look past all of Mymy’s oc sailor friends). Thank you for the read zaryan.
It's said and shown time and time again that Maya is a pussy and even in the worst cases she'd never actually put herself in a dangerous situation
(OP HERE) HOI MAYA IS COAL, I PUT IT HERE CAUSE THE MEDS JOKE
i have never been more invested in a piece of literacy in my entire life, first few chapters kinda suck though
I got permabanned from reddit for saying this; that such thing as female HOI4 players were either trannies or niggas pretending to be foids. I wonder who would have been triggered by such statement...
Someone ought to continue that piece of kino in the same ESL style
>fippy bippy
keep gooning to and propogating offsite tranny fanfiction, this is why the zarty is dead. everyone is an offsiter. everyone
>keep gooning to and propogating offsite tranny fanfiction, this is why the zarty is dead. everyone is an offsiter. everyone
>everyone is a soulless brown new shartycuck and maya has become the go-to self insert for invalid trannies and retarded chudcels alike for displaying how much they want to kill themselves. there's never been more 'zellig ackjaks on the catalog or index despite the zellig lee's who created them having dying out like all the other oldfags a long time ago. how is this possible? how did things get so brown and retarded? why is everyone so obsessed with suicide and abuse?
>why is everyone so obsessed with suicide and abuse?
the first noble truth is that life is suffering o algo
meds, i'm a chudquoter and i'm a cute trans girl that doesn't use xitter.
i should write the last chapter like the last episode of breaking bad. Maya just kills everyone in the alcohol gang or something and dies o algo
ADLAL was gemmy(doe it was made by a troon), they privated it because they're retarded or something but I 'chived it
i hated this because 1. literally everything prior to chapter 9 is completely fucking ignored, and 2. Roos has NO FUCKING REASON TO LIKE MAYA. 3. the formating is awful, niggerfag has never heard of the enter key. 4. the pacing is awful, maya just cut herself and her family saw it? welp its never addressed and her family NEVER BOTHERS TO FUCKING MENTION IT AGAIN
what really pisses me off, is that the epilogue is really good. it couldve just been its own short story
yeah that's all a trvke, I like it mainly because it didn't take 2 weeks for every chapter to release and because it actually had some good length
and the Roos part is so funny, it's obvious the author is self inserting as Maya and Roos is a way of fantasizing of being saved by a woman. He doesn't want to put effort into fixing himself so he fantasizes about being saved by some woman for no reason
that's notably similar to fiction made by women where the female protagonist is sweeped off their feet by or fought over by big beautiful muscular men.
also im really tired of people pretending that 10 dutch days is a bone-chilling, spine-tingling, genre-redefining, character-driven ZEMERALD because it FUCKING SUCKS
the dialogue is annoying, the author keeps mentioning things that dont fucking matter, and they wont shut up about THE HECKIN RPG THAT MAYA MADE
cool concept doe
some plebbit fanfic on AO3 that take place in the future. coco is essentially maya now, and maya is somewhat like Coco now, but she still has anxiety. id maybe recommend reading it if your bored, but dont bother otherwise
10DD is an example of ideaslop, it's all concept, no actually good writing just the "omg Coco is Maya and Maya is Coco" idea
yeah the Roos part is easily the most coally and self insert thing imaginable
it couldve been so gemmy doe. if they had gotten into a circumstance where they had to talk to eachother (ie forced to work together on a project) then that could start their friendship then relationship. but APPARENTLY THATS TOO HARD
it could have, but the author chose to fill it with retarded dialogue and SNCA that just dragged the story pointlessly
Most of the dialogue is clunky and the Roos thing does feel forced but I can suspend my disbelief and say it is possible for Roos to have a crush on Maya. But the ending with the whole “it’s okay Maya you don’t have to make anymore actual progress on your struggles which has been the entire focus so far, I’ll just carry around a bag to baby you from now on” really fucking sucks and defeats the whole point of the story. Goes from iron to coal with the last chapter.
that part genuinely pissed me off, the author actually want to be babied and treated like a child(not surprising for a troon), so they self insert as Maya
think what happened is the author decided to private them like a SLF
Seasons 2 and 4 are seemingly lost but here's season 3(doe it's a pain to actually read because archive is being retarded, just screenshot it or something):https://web.archive.org/web/20250607142254/https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ReWi4q0fpLO92o9B_aZrj1Bg8rG8PFNc/edit?tab=t.0
SNCA award
click the see other pages archived under this link or something
Probably some weird nigga inserting themselves into relationships with the characters
https://camongezellig.newgrounds.com/art
>>108373
No Cam is alright, it’s a little self insert-y but Mats was mainly just supposed to be a genderbent Maya.
i hunger for more zellig comics
Mats is a bit of a self insert but he actually works because he fits into the story (4 letter name + plot relevance) and isn't the main focus like almost every other faggot oc in zellig fics
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