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Ok Zaryans, I've read a decent amount of fanfics since I joined this GEMMY SPACE and I've decided to rank them all (the ones I felt like)
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Reunion. 5/10: It's ok, the pacing is kinda quick for what it's trying to do, and it feels the needs to explain everything instead of letting the reader interpret it.
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Death and Reborn, 7/10: I would've given this a 9, but I re-read it and realized it wasn't as good as I remembered. I do like the concept, but it also suffers from bad initial pacing and overexplaining. Also it was assisted with AI and it kinda shows in some parts, but it didn't hinder how I felt about it. Pretty decent, but it could be better
10 Dutch Days, 2/10: Really annoying dialogue. They won't shut up about the stupid game Maya played, and mentioning important things which are never brought up again. Everything feels forced, and I just don't care about any of the characters. It's a decent concept, having the personalities of Coco and Maya somewhat swapped (doe Maya still kinda has anxiety), but it's so poorly executed I can't give it any higher than a 2/10
When Days Get Brighter in Amsterdam, 4/10: Could've been decent were it not
>wordswordswords
the fanfiction. It's also written like its a screenplay and NOT a book, so that's weird. There's also a side story that I just don't care about, and the nigger who uploaded it to AO3 is a retard and its impossible to read so you have to go on PLEBBIT if you wanna actually read it.
Kinda cool concept, but once again, things feel pretty forced
Total Opposites, 0/10: Abysmal Yurifag dogshit. Cleo likes Coco and goes about getting with her in the stupidest ways possible. Everybody acts out of character and nothing makes sense. SNCA the fanfiction.
One More Shot, 7/10: Maya becomes and alcoholic.
Creator deleted it because they're a selfish little fuck or whatever. The first few chapters really fucking suck doe
Tipping Point, 6/10: Coco hits Maya cause she got mad over an insult. The family kinda collapses from there. It's not finished yet so idk how it's gonna end. Decent storytelling though it's not very descriptive, and has pretty akward dialogue at times. Also Coco acts really out of character in this, and the Eiko plotline is shoved in which completely derails the entire thing.
Project Ongezoid, -3 Thrembillion/10: One of the only Zellig Fanfics on Watpad. I would've given it a 9/10, but for SOME REASON, THE CREATOR MADE AN AMAZING AND kinda EMOTIONAL STORY, AND DECIDED TO MAKE THE ENDING "IT WAS ALL A DREAM!!" WHY??? IT WAS SO FUCKING GOOD AND YOU RUINED IT YOU SELFISH NIGGER
that's all from me, im writing my own fanfiction right now about Coco beating up Maya's shitskin bully (which might lead into an overarching story from there) but ive been kinda depressed (Maya reference GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEG) so it might take a while
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CONTRAVERSIAL
Comfortably Uncomfortable, 7/10: The Title sums up how I felt while reading it. This is the length of an average novel GEG. Maya and Coco essentially fall in love (in a natural way) but because they're sisters, it just feels weird. I know they're not blood related but it's still a bit weird. ALTHOUGH, it never made me that uncomfortable throughout, though it did get close at times.
There's no incest (cause incest needs 1. the people to be blood related and 2. actual sex, which is not present in the thing)
Overall, it was a decent read, but it really should've been between Maya and Someone Else, or just have Maya and Coco getting closer instead of falling in love.
>ESL FNF PEDO ESL FNF PEDO ESL FNF PEDO ESL FNF PEDO YOU CANNOT LIKE ANY OF THIS BECAUSE IT IS YURIFAG SLOP YOU FA-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!
>This is the length of an average novel
>Maya and Coco essentially fall in love (in a natural way)
we OVERLY good on that folk😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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Putin is niggerpussy. If he had balls like Ivan IV Vasilyevich he would ripped his opposition ( online haters ) into two with horses
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the fact that i completely forgot about that just goes to show how bad this was written
ok that makes more sense than the esl unformatted niggernonsense you had before
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why is the plotbeat always like "something happens, maya gets depressedorino or suicidalorino" but never do it in a realistic or satisfying way. there's never enough buildup, and it starts with Maya in a worse mental state instead of building to get to that point and THEN having her getting better
though this could just be because people wanna include this stuff in their first works when they don't have the fundamentals, which is a common pitfall in writing
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>"stay positive"
>"i love talking about nothing"
>"i support the current thing"
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I do.
>27% shitalo-greekike
>22% latino mestizo
>5% ashkenazi (literally)
This meat is so brown wdf
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blud got banned for being a truecell o algx
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wdym by birds and pots?
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running in the 60's
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<pie pie pie 28 replies omitted.
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Mind you not all gen z speak e-bonics. Gen z is not a monolith generation, there's many types kf Gen z. I still have hope for Gen z brcause I met a lot of third positionist nationalist(Not maga or Nick Fuentes retards, people who love their southern heritage)
ong so skibidi ohio rizz fr fr lowkey chicken is good asf bru
Seriously, half of gen z speak like that, even grown up generation ou algo
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zaryans a new fnf maya song has dropped, thoughts?
inb4 kane hands typed this post
2 replies omitted.it sounds alright but not memorable or something
fnf is truly just slop music
>it sounds alright but not memorable or something
>fnf is truly just slop music
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The art is good. Only improvement would be making her hair a little lighter so the details show up more clearly. The attached resources should help.
this you?
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SOTM Website 24 replies omitted.
Oh son of the mask, but what does it have to do with Sid?
the sidson poster likes son of the mask for some reason idk
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>shieeet mane our pph better than you white crackas we spam pregnant soytan gemmies shiet
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BELGIUMSISSIES THIS IS YOUR MINDSET
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i just can't... puny pathetic fakemayacels make me laugh. 46 replies omitted.
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it is now. mayaLegend is coined now, and shall not be unchanged.
why am I coining the word cause I'm a mayaLegend of myself
leaked everywhere award
>leaked everywhere award
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Obvious choice but this is how I imagine his voice
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I used to browse it back when it had useful informations and wasn't nusoifuck shitfest
It was one of the only outlets into a somewhat unbiased take on the shitsphere under Froot but with it gaining popularity it quickly turned into the same slop we're all trying to avoid
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<my face right now 9 replies omitted.
are you from 1990, wdym anti-soviet speech made you a target of glowies (or the kgb o algo)?
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