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File: 1777218037190.pdf (97.53 KB, Comfort, Pain, and Healing.pdf)

 No.130939

First time writing a 'fic, please go easy on me.

 No.130947

Bumo because the site ACKed yesterday

 No.130953

File: 1777289198717.png (4.42 KB, 298x47, ClipboardImage.png)

I love that you wrote this Zaryan and please never stop writing if you enjoy it but this is straight ass
I recommend writing stuff in your native language next time and translating that into english, with a view to avoid repetition. There's also no need to write down everything: we (specifically on the zarty) know about who these characters are, how they behave and what their thought process is.

 No.130957

>but this is straight ass
read it with a straight face at first until this part

 No.130972

File: 1777292158125.png (389.12 KB, 840x853, ClipboardImage.png)

The fact that it's formatted like one of my uni papers alongside the fact that the prose also reads like a fucking report does not help reinforce that it's a fiktie



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