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 No.107423

does anyone have the plebbit fanfic “a different look at life” archived, it was deleted cause the author is a selfish little fuck

 No.107435

if you have the URL you could check archives of it, photon reddit (a frontend for reddit has an ability to find archived versions of it.

 No.107463

>>107423
Depends on how old it is, there's a thread on here that archived some of them

 No.107476

>>107435
If you put the title into google and type “Reddit” afterwards you’ll get the posts. What Archieves should I use?

 No.107477

>>107463
It’s only about 6 months old

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 No.110125

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just half-read half-skimmed through the whole thing, not bad actually

 No.110136

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>>110125
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It fucking sucks

 No.110160

>>110125
i breezed through some of it and this guy writes like an 10 year old, it screams melodramatic on a character level

 No.110164

>>110160
It was basically two separate stories that had very little to do with each other, and the epilogue just shit on everything Maya did to deal with her problems with Roos treating her like a toddler.

 No.110180

>>110164
evendoe Maya did FUCKING NOTHING to deal with her problems or however Israel bombed a hospital

 No.110185

>>110164
Agreed, everything before chapter 9 is completely ignored

 No.110186

>>110164
thats basically how every zellig troon writes, just a cliche "resolution" to the real thing with the same story beats, which is telling since they'll tell you they like the show cuz it's "quirky" and call u a pedo for understanding half the appeal

 No.110278

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>>110186
absolute niggerbabble what are you saying

 No.110283

>>110180
Evendoe Maya did go to therapy and was able to admit to her family that she has problems. It’s not a lot, but it’s at least something. She could’ve continued building on that but the self inserting troon had to make Roos protect Maya from any further improvement.

 No.110287

>>110278
im saying they'll try to "fix" maya and make her more social, and they'll do it by having her lash out on one of her sisters to lay out stepping stones. it reads like a cliche melodrama, telling of how they view the show.

also like half the appeal is cuz you wanna see some cute cartoon girls, and they call u a pedo for it

 No.110299

>>110287
Reminds me of how they wrote Snoot fics, actually pelt with rocks trannies they are so detached from reality that they couldn't write anything remotely good even if they tried

 No.110301

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>AND THEN MAYA LASHES OUT AT HER SISTERS GETTING INTO A DEPRESSIVE SPIRAL AND TAKING HRT, MAKING HER MORE SOCIAL THROUGH SUPPORT

 No.110303

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>AND THEN MAYA LASHES OUT AT HER SISTERS GETTING INTO A DEPRESSIVE SPIRAL AND TAKING HRT, MAKING HER MORE SOCIAL THROUGH SUPPORT

 No.110359

>>110283
the fact that i completely forgot about that just goes to show how bad this was written

 No.110360

>>110287
ok that makes more sense than the esl unformatted niggernonsense you had before

 No.110361

>>110301
why is the plotbeat always like "something happens, maya gets depressedorino or suicidalorino" but never do it in a realistic or satisfying way. there's never enough buildup, and it starts with Maya in a worse mental state instead of building to get to that point and THEN having her getting better

though this could just be because people wanna include this stuff in their first works when they don't have the fundamentals, which is a common pitfall in writing



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