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>>117524
is it better than 10 Dutch days?

Can we get a reddit TLDR for the Zaryans who don't know how to read

>>117527
yeah
barely

>>117529
stupid roos x maya yurifag. if you wanna read, start at chapter 9 because everything before it is completely fucking ignored

>>117527
>>117529
the formating also sucks ass, with the author forgetting to start a new line whenever a character speaks, making it very confusing to read
obviously the predditors loved it, but since they loved 10 dutch days, im not suprised

>>117532
warum interessierst du dich für diese redditcucks zaryan? vergiss das, ich gebe dir stattdessen eine trQQthnQQke, wenn sie bei google nach "mayagugu mymygugu.mp4" suchen (einschließlich der anführungszeichen), erscheint ein echtes gemerald.

>>117533
gem

>>117533
ESL

how it feels reading this niggerbabble

>>117524
Y'know, shit like this makes me envy niggers for being illiterate

Why is the doc link dead?
There is no depth and it's so cliché about loneliness and HOLY SHIT DEPRESSION, NEET CULTURE, AND STUTTERING IN EVERY SENTENCE! I hope you have fun with your gachalife-tier text conversations that are supposed to make the reader feel emotional. Self-harm, oh i shit bricks, but you then put the same generic words 3 times in a row without any sort of detail or insight into them. You don't have to constantly restate the character you're talking about, we have functioning brains.
WTF is
>F-fuck no! M-meanwhile I sit in my f-fucking room all f-fucking day! I h-have n-nobody.. I-I’m b-broken.. I-I’ll n-never be g-good enough..
??? Is this from a leaked vivziepop script? What is this, some waz/were hotel special episode? This belongs in some wattpad dump.
t. skimmed through it
4/10

>There is no depth and it's so cliché about loneliness and HOLY SHIT DEPRESSION, NEET CULTURE, AND STUTTERING IN EVERY SENTENCE!

>>117986
geg theres no way thats an actual snippet

>>117987
Pointing out how a story is poorly formatted, fucking sucks, and is very obviously written by someone who has never been depressed and didn’t bother to look into it deeper than a surface level means you’re a tranny apparently
Suffering without meaning is just boring and tasteless
I’d also like to mention how the inciting incident is so forced that it actually pissed me off

>>117988
Tw: self harm or something
This is another snippet
> Meanwhile Maya is sitting on her bed, and staring at the knife in her hand. She hid it after her first try, and forgot about it. She felt extremely guilty for everything she said, and all the pain she caused her family. She takes a shaky breath, and brings the knife to her skin. She’s just trying it… She drags the knife across her skin fast and hard. Immediately her arm starts bleeding, but it’s not enough. She cuts her skin again, and again, and again. After about 5 times, she collapses on her bed. She looks at her arm, which is bleeding but the cuts don’t seem too deep. She puts her hoodie back on, and stumbles to the bathroom to clean up the wounds. She manages to stop the bleeding, but the cuts are a dark red color. She tries to bandage her arm, but quickly gives up and throws the makeshift bandage in the trash. She crawls into bed, and as her guilt is slowly consuming her, she slowly falls asleep.
I don’t think I’ve been more unfathomably angry in my life then when I read this

>>118009
most unimaginative nothingburger
didnt even describe any pain

>>118010
that's because it wouldn't hurt

>>118011
this statement is so fucking retarded that it genuinely left me speechless
what do you mean it wouldnt hurt, she's fucking cutting herself

>>117986
also:

>>118012
have you ever gotten cut before? if the blade is sharp enough, you wouldn't even feel it (plus muh adrenaline)

>>118014
yes
i have
and it hurt
also, whose assuming the blade is sharp? most blades are usually not razor-cut-through-paper-thin, and i highly doubt this "knife" (that the author didnt fucking bother describing) is that sharp

>>118015
*who's
because im retarded
also, regardless of how sharp the knife was, or if she felt pain, its doesnt change that the paragraph itself is fucking tasteless

>>117986
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>>118016
>needing accurate representation of self-harm and depression to validate Maya's inner turmoil
mayakeks...

>>118017
if youre not going to give an accurate representation of something as heavy as depression or self-harm, then you shouldnt write about it

>>118010
trvke

>>118018
this

>>117986
id like to mention that there are multiple instances throughout this story where maya doesnt eat for days on end
and the author never bothers to describe how that feels
god what a waste of time reading this was

I remember xhis fic, I thought it was decent, writer is a troon however. The whole Maya x Roos plot is essentially just their fantasy of some woman saving them from their NEET life. Xhey clearly just self insert as Maya.
>>118021
Maya is literally known for not eating much in canon doe
>>117986
Author privated the story like a selfish little fuck

>>118414
my point was that the auther never really describe the sensations that occur when you dont eat for that like (i.e. stomach pangs, fatigue) outside of using basic words like "she was really hungry"
doe i didnt really word it that well so my bad i guess