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Markup /zellig/132890
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>>132842 ive noticed that writerfail seems to have restraint he didnt explain as to why Maya tried to kill herself, because that's not relevant yet. <MISERYspace he also seems to trust the audience to understand things, and SHOWS more than he tells (though this is inconsistant) he didn't write the immediate aftermath, because he just had to SHOW how tired Coco as a means of TELLING how exhausting it was he didn't tell us how far the school is from the hospital, because Coco's calves spasming AND the nurse's shocked reaction SHOW that it is really far away
