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>>110205 I liked Reunion. I think college grad age like 22-23 might’ve worked better than 26 for some plot points and there is a bit too much of Mymy’s oc sailor friends. But I liked how Maya’s anxiety was characterized by negative intrusive thoughts, that was authentic to me. I thought the motivations and reactions were mostly in character, and the writing was relatively good. I agree the pacing is a little quick but I think it kinda makes sense that Coco and Mymy would push because they only have a few weeks. Personally I would give it 8/10 compared to other lig fics I’ve read, and a 7 if the next chapter puts Maya into a relationship with that sailor. I’m just a sucker for wholesome adopted sibling love and bonding.
