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>>13345
Lookin good so far.
Some feedback: idk if that canvas texture works quite as well or if it's just a little too strong, but I suggest using a different overlay texture for the whole comic, maybe something more paper-y like in picrel. Something rather light but not too distracting but still noticeable upclose.
As well if you're up for accuracy, this color (#eacccc) is what Massa uses for shading on the characters via multiply; not exact all the time but around the ballpark after searching through a few pics of his. I bring this up since I notice you shade with gray which can be fine in some cases, but can look a little dull depending on others. The one Massa uses makes the shadows a little more nice and warm for the girls, but try it out and see which one you think looks better, this is only my suggestion of course and you're doing a good job with everything else so far.