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>>3804
this is good, but it's not over, the title screen may be complete but what about the cover art?
>>3833
this is good, but it would be better if the gameplay was only about a minute long and used the gemmiest footage from both >>3828 and >>3842 
<zarty space
Then end the trailer with a box shot screen 
<"box shot" or "box art reveal" Is a technique that involves showing the game’s box art or case in the foreground while the background showcases in-game footage, or scenes, or general atmosphere. This is a common way to highlight the game's official artwork while still giving a glimpse into the game's world, offering both promotional and immersive elements in one shot. It's commonly used in game trailers to link the real-world product (the game case) with the in-game experience.
saying DOWNLOAD NOW only available on soyzellig.party and either it's free or valued in a zarty currency 
<like gems or zems or stroopwaffels, 
Add "information"(make it funny or something), additional logos, animated background
<a simple but gemmy idea would be the titlescreen but glowie smokey redish perhaps orangish (unless it doesn't work asthetically) with moving cinders and a smaller Mymy(same artstyle, keep the newgrounds feel) since the box art will be the centrepiece, but that's just 1 idea, you or someone else might have a better one, however someone has to Actually make it
you could also have ==Vera== say 
<they are rage, brutal, without mercy. But you... You were the worst. Rip and Tear until it is Done.
with the same vocal affects as the first voice 
<I think it would really really really be a shame it you didn't make that change specifically
==Don't upload anything to the ZPVA yet we're not done.==